for Push Back9/11/2023 c9 jaronh659
I have admit your premise for this story would have been great I would have read this story wholeheartedly.
I have admit your premise for this story would have been great I would have read this story wholeheartedly.
8/19/2021 c4 RandomGuest
Wowza.
Wowza.
3/19/2021 c9 JustAnotherGuest
WHERE'S THE DAMN CHAPTER FOR COLD STEEL? I AWAIT YOUR EXISTANCE ONCE MORE
WHERE'S THE DAMN CHAPTER FOR COLD STEEL? I AWAIT YOUR EXISTANCE ONCE MORE
2/17/2021 c7 Great Sage Equaling Heaven
And so Hikigaya enters the dark faze of every gym-bros life. The period where you find yourself attracted to small fit twinks. Lets all hope he recovers soon with his dignity intact.
And so Hikigaya enters the dark faze of every gym-bros life. The period where you find yourself attracted to small fit twinks. Lets all hope he recovers soon with his dignity intact.
10/13/2020 c9 putunembahgito
You have good draft, I'm just disappointed wheb you decided not to continue, perhaps your fic is open to be adopted?
You have good draft, I'm just disappointed wheb you decided not to continue, perhaps your fic is open to be adopted?
3/28/2020 c9 
3Markus-Antonius
Eh Gary Stu or not it was fun to read in a way! I’m a little disappointed but it’s better to know when to stop so you aren’t pushing yourself. Then that’s when you really dislike what you’re writing.
3Markus-AntoniusEh Gary Stu or not it was fun to read in a way! I’m a little disappointed but it’s better to know when to stop so you aren’t pushing yourself. Then that’s when you really dislike what you’re writing.
2/24/2020 c1 Mickey2410
Your story is not bad, it is actually good, but after reading the draft of the following chapters I think that if I had lost interest, regarding the reasons, I think that instead of saving saber, Hachiman should have saved Yui, about Mary Sue Hachiman The only time I felt that was when I hit Kaori's stalker, if a character is different in a fanfiction it is not bad and in essence the anime / LN Hachiman is there in your story only that it is more expressive
Your story is not bad, it is actually good, but after reading the draft of the following chapters I think that if I had lost interest, regarding the reasons, I think that instead of saving saber, Hachiman should have saved Yui, about Mary Sue Hachiman The only time I felt that was when I hit Kaori's stalker, if a character is different in a fanfiction it is not bad and in essence the anime / LN Hachiman is there in your story only that it is more expressive
2/24/2020 c9 Mickey2410
Your story is not bad, it is actually good, but after reading the draft of the following chapters I think that if I had lost interest
Your story is not bad, it is actually good, but after reading the draft of the following chapters I think that if I had lost interest
11/12/2019 c5 17WwEpsilonwW
What... What do you mean forgotten, h-hic, he's getting his own movie and everything.
17WwEpsilonwWWhat... What do you mean forgotten, h-hic, he's getting his own movie and everything.
8/5/2019 c9 10x66 0x6f 0x63 0x6b 0x65 0x72
What a waste, honestly the plot hole which wasn't even mentioned in the story could've taken a different route where hachiman was jogging early in the morning and saw the incident about to happen, the OCC of the characters are fine, this is meant to be a fanfiction after all having it remain the same as cannon without changes just makes it boring.
The specifics of a character can change as long as you give them personality instead of a blank slate, and give them a reason why they exist that's what a character should be.
Sadly my review is to late to change your opinion of this story.
10x66 0x6f 0x63 0x6b 0x65 0x72What a waste, honestly the plot hole which wasn't even mentioned in the story could've taken a different route where hachiman was jogging early in the morning and saw the incident about to happen, the OCC of the characters are fine, this is meant to be a fanfiction after all having it remain the same as cannon without changes just makes it boring.
The specifics of a character can change as long as you give them personality instead of a blank slate, and give them a reason why they exist that's what a character should be.
Sadly my review is to late to change your opinion of this story.
5/28/2019 c1 HamClad
I imagine Hachiman's dad is the sort of dad that watches anime with his children.
I imagine Hachiman's dad is the sort of dad that watches anime with his children.