for In Your Nightmares3/14/2021 c1 catspats31
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While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:
"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."
Go remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed like Archive Of Our Own.
2/21/2021 c1 Dipper punishmen
Bill won't leave dipper alone because he was hungry, dipped felt annoyed and screamed at bill to leave him alone.
Dipper: BILL CAN YOU SHUT UP IM TRYING TO FOCUS!
Dipper felt scared because he now know he's gonna get punished by bill.
Bill: oh pine tree you shouldn't have said that.
Bill smirk because he knew the best punishment for dipper.
Bill: time for punishment pine tree.
Dipper felt scared because he know he is either getting fucked or beaten, bill snapped his finger and dipper was tied to a chair.
Dipper: bill can't we talk about this... it was just a mistake.
Bill: don't worry pine tree I'm not gonna fuck you or beat you *smirk* I'm gonna do both.
Sorry guys I ran outta ideas I hope you liked it even if it was short or trash I hope you enjoy but till next time
TO BE CONTINUED
Bill won't leave dipper alone because he was hungry, dipped felt annoyed and screamed at bill to leave him alone.
Dipper: BILL CAN YOU SHUT UP IM TRYING TO FOCUS!
Dipper felt scared because he now know he's gonna get punished by bill.
Bill: oh pine tree you shouldn't have said that.
Bill smirk because he knew the best punishment for dipper.
Bill: time for punishment pine tree.
Dipper felt scared because he know he is either getting fucked or beaten, bill snapped his finger and dipper was tied to a chair.
Dipper: bill can't we talk about this... it was just a mistake.
Bill: don't worry pine tree I'm not gonna fuck you or beat you *smirk* I'm gonna do both.
Sorry guys I ran outta ideas I hope you liked it even if it was short or trash I hope you enjoy but till next time
TO BE CONTINUED
3/7/2019 c1 Rosirk
I do agree that those two songs are awesome. This was actually one of the few BillDip fanfics that i really liked. My only other BillDip favorite from this site is "Obsessed." It's pretty long and has some english grammar issues, but it' still worth a read for people looking for good BillDip fanfic, and yes, it is rated M if you were wondering.
Honestly one of the only flaws i could find with this fanfic was how it was only a chapter. Although if it went on longer and got boring, i guess keeping it short was the better alternative.
Now i am going to check out some other works by this writer.
I do agree that those two songs are awesome. This was actually one of the few BillDip fanfics that i really liked. My only other BillDip favorite from this site is "Obsessed." It's pretty long and has some english grammar issues, but it' still worth a read for people looking for good BillDip fanfic, and yes, it is rated M if you were wondering.
Honestly one of the only flaws i could find with this fanfic was how it was only a chapter. Although if it went on longer and got boring, i guess keeping it short was the better alternative.
Now i am going to check out some other works by this writer.
2/10/2019 c1 Cookie
Well shit, I’m horny.
Well shit, I’m horny.
1/19/2019 c1 Guest
i liked it... BUT I WISH IT WASN'T FINISHED IS SO GOOOOOOOOD
i liked it... BUT I WISH IT WASN'T FINISHED IS SO GOOOOOOOOD
8/3/2016 c1 
13Yuna the Yaoi shipper
omg and u like write a second chapter to this omg I'm so hyped on this or make a sequal
13Yuna the Yaoi shipperomg and u like write a second chapter to this omg I'm so hyped on this or make a sequal
7/19/2016 c1 Angela
I would actually love to have a dream like that with Bill if I was Dipper.
I would actually love to have a dream like that with Bill if I was Dipper.