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2/22/2017 c1 21Nightshade2412
What a brilliant concept. Beverley's wonderful, and this opens up a whole backstory that could be explored. The action feels maybe a bit disjointed and underdeveloped, but on the whole it's well written and I enjoyed it. Plus the flash-forward (is there a proper term?) took the words out of my mouth, as well as adding to the character development. Nice :)

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