
4/29/2017 c6 Guest
I really enjoyed this, will you continue please?
I really enjoyed this, will you continue please?
7/11/2016 c6
1forgetmenotlovely
Their relationship is really cute. Seriously...just...get together already! A suggestion for the writing: though very hard to do, try to avoid cliche phrases and colloquialism outside of dialogues. Really looking forward to more chapters and kisses!

Their relationship is really cute. Seriously...just...get together already! A suggestion for the writing: though very hard to do, try to avoid cliche phrases and colloquialism outside of dialogues. Really looking forward to more chapters and kisses!
6/30/2016 c6 Guest
I forgot to ask, are they both single now or is Sasuke still dating Sakura and Hinata dating naruto?
I forgot to ask, are they both single now or is Sasuke still dating Sakura and Hinata dating naruto?
6/30/2016 c6 Guest
Great story, hope you will continue it!
Great story, hope you will continue it!
6/29/2016 c6 Guest
UGh this is so good it's frustrating to read
I love it keep it up.
I
UGh this is so good it's frustrating to read
I love it keep it up.
I
6/27/2016 c6 Mili
Another 2 great chapters :) you got me hooked into this. I'm curious of what happened in their past, and what will happen to them in the future. Btw I really love their relationship, your writing is flowing perfectly.
Love it , please continue writing .
Another 2 great chapters :) you got me hooked into this. I'm curious of what happened in their past, and what will happen to them in the future. Btw I really love their relationship, your writing is flowing perfectly.
Love it , please continue writing .
6/26/2016 c4 mili
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW 3 SO CUTE. I love it. Moooooore please :D love your writing style btw.
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW 3 SO CUTE. I love it. Moooooore please :D love your writing style btw.
6/25/2016 c4 Guest
Loved every single chapter :) love it love it love it, please continue writing . Im so looking forward to the next chapter .
Loved every single chapter :) love it love it love it, please continue writing . Im so looking forward to the next chapter .
6/25/2016 c3 pandagurl
Aww i love it. I'm excited about chapter four
Aww i love it. I'm excited about chapter four