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Just wanted to let you know that you don't need to put a full stop after quotation marks. Every punctuation, whether it is a full stop, coma, exclamation mark, question mark, etc. is put before a quotation mark and that's it. About the story, I like it and looking forward to more
Just wanted to let you know that you don't need to put a full stop after quotation marks. Every punctuation, whether it is a full stop, coma, exclamation mark, question mark, etc. is put before a quotation mark and that's it. About the story, I like it and looking forward to more
7/27/2016 c3 
7Hanable-13
still not sure y i was confused.. srry.
good story... is malfoy going to be connected to the ghost at all? a fairy or soemthing maybe?
H }:)
7Hanable-13still not sure y i was confused.. srry.
good story... is malfoy going to be connected to the ghost at all? a fairy or soemthing maybe?
H }:)
6/30/2016 c2 Guest
You have piqued my interest..
You have piqued my interest..
6/24/2016 c1 Honoria Granger
A brilliant beginning and a wonderfully unusual location (I've been to Wales, and it is indeed magical, and unused in HP fanfic) , but the switch between first person and third person is just too annoying for me to continue. I don't want to have to leave off enjoying the story to try to figure out who's talking. Sometimes the "I" is Hermione and sometimes it's Mr. Rees. Very tiresome. It's usually best to keep stories as simple as possible and to leave tricks like this to people like James Joyce.
A brilliant beginning and a wonderfully unusual location (I've been to Wales, and it is indeed magical, and unused in HP fanfic) , but the switch between first person and third person is just too annoying for me to continue. I don't want to have to leave off enjoying the story to try to figure out who's talking. Sometimes the "I" is Hermione and sometimes it's Mr. Rees. Very tiresome. It's usually best to keep stories as simple as possible and to leave tricks like this to people like James Joyce.