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7/25/2016 c6 11inlovewithshizaya
Good thing I checked out this fanfic. I would have missed out on a totally interesting story if I hadn’t. Well, better now, than never, right?
7/25/2016 c6 8Attackoneverything
Can't wait for more! On the edge of my stadium seat XD
7/24/2016 c6 KawaiiiPotato
Awww that was so short! But then again I'd rather you update short but weekly. That was really sad. He had to go through all that again. And lol to Mephisto. He's annoying af but he's also adorable, and funny at the same time. I have this love-hate relationship with him lol. I love how you make every chapter a cliffhanger. Another love-hate relationship haha. I hate cliffhangers yet I love how it makes me more interested in the story :D Keep up the good work! Gambatte ne! O
7/22/2016 c5 KawaiiiPotato
TT Why does a chapter so short hurt so bad? How you can trigger emotions with just few words?! This chapter really got me...he had to go through that again. I just wanna like hug him so bad :'( *Whew*
7/18/2016 c5 FireWolf210
Noooo... Cliffhangers...
7/18/2016 c5 Attackoneverything
Watering eyes DX
Can't wait for the update XD
Excited now XD XD
7/17/2016 c5 25OrangeWolf4
Please update this is an amazing story.
7/17/2016 c5 11Faisalliot
Woo! That was awesome! I like what you've got, and you're very welcome for all of the help.
7/15/2016 c4 KawaiiiPotato
Woah, can't believe fanfiction didn't notify me about the update! Thank you for the mention and the reply! OMG I felt so special hahaha. And thanks for the update! These questions and freaking cliffhangers never fail to intrigue me! Looking forward for the next chapter :D
7/11/2016 c4 Faisalliot
Rin's thoughts on Shura are literally mine whenever I see an attractive barely-clothed girl too *loudly blushes*. Anyway, even if this was short, woohoo! We met Shura! Hell to the YESSS. Shura's actually one of my favorite characters so I'm pretty stoked to see her. Well, so far, you're doing a really good job so far and I can't wait to see more. Happy writing!
7/6/2016 c3 Faisalliot
Pfft, the end of march is near my birthday (March 29th). And, no problem regarding my reviews! I'm really enjoying this so far and I think you've got loads of potential (With a little practice) as a writer! This chapter was on the short side, but it was definitely necessary. Yukio FINALLY got it, and the plot's being built up. Good job! Ooo~! Special request: Can you make Bon slap Rin as "payback" at some point? You can decide what they do next, I just totally want to see that happen. (Idea; The slap can jog Rin's memory of when he hit Bon and he's like"wtf ur a dik") Thank you, and happy writing! Speaking of which, I should probs get back to my own writing...
7/4/2016 c3 KawaiiiPotato
Awww, that was too short! But I'd rather you update every week than once a month if it's not too much of a bother :) I really like this story and I'm not the most patient person lol
7/4/2016 c3 Frwt
Ugh, i don't know
Actually, i like long-story, but sometimes it can be boring

maybe i choose short-story
7/3/2016 c3 7Yukio Mustang
Ohh this chapter was short but definitely needed. I like how Rin describes Mephesto. Its cool to see him described more demonic, then humanish. I often see him described more humanish and forgetting some of the more noticable features. i especially liked how you described the eyes because in real life i can see that being true, them almost glowing. I also do have to say that I do like how you respond in chapters cause I have to admit, I read a lot and try and review a lot, but I dont know if the author noticed. So hats off to you.
7/3/2016 c3 12yukichicken
Rin is so cute and adorable! I'm so in love with this story and it's only the third chapter! Ughhhhh thank you so much for writing this story! You're fantastic baby lol XD
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