for Path to Remembrance3/8/2017 c8 
4LightArrow
I really hate garp sometimes... ok alot of the time... poor aiko ... he knows and said nothing... he at least told ace and luffy, well Lucy sorta by accident, sigh let's all just kill garp ok? ... ok
4LightArrowI really hate garp sometimes... ok alot of the time... poor aiko ... he knows and said nothing... he at least told ace and luffy, well Lucy sorta by accident, sigh let's all just kill garp ok? ... ok
10/7/2016 c4 Guest
The chapter is pretty cute, with the two children being siblings and all, but you really need to decide on a POV. You kept on changing from 'I' to 'Aiko' throughout the entire chapter, and it got annoying. Otherwise, it was a fairly good chapter.
The chapter is pretty cute, with the two children being siblings and all, but you really need to decide on a POV. You kept on changing from 'I' to 'Aiko' throughout the entire chapter, and it got annoying. Otherwise, it was a fairly good chapter.
8/20/2016 c3 4TDI-Ryro-Eclares
There are a few grammar mistakes, but I really like where this is going! Please update again soon!
:)
4TDI-Ryro-EclaresThere are a few grammar mistakes, but I really like where this is going! Please update again soon!
:)
8/19/2016 c3 4LightArrow
Heyo star-chan it was a great chapter and poor aiko, but she gets to meet ace ... White beards daughter and gold rogers son. Be great if they did the childhood friends fall in love thing... Well see you around star-chan, oh and nice to meet you kit-chan.
4LightArrowHeyo star-chan it was a great chapter and poor aiko, but she gets to meet ace ... White beards daughter and gold rogers son. Be great if they did the childhood friends fall in love thing... Well see you around star-chan, oh and nice to meet you kit-chan.
6/29/2016 c1 Redmin Soulute
PLEAZ keep going I wanna know whats going to happen to her
PLEAZ keep going I wanna know whats going to happen to her