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7/6/2016 c1 1Varangian Guard
I like it so far. The only nitpick I have in this chapter is Paul's dogtag. The religion should be listed as 'Roman-Cath', at least that's what my pair of dogtags has listed. Other than that small thing I'm liking it so far.
7/6/2016 c1 Joe McNulty
Just read the summary and I already love it.
7/6/2016 c2 2AK74FU2
Huh... even more interesting... nah, messin' with ya. I like this, favorite was the javelin, I know how they fire, and how big of a boom they make... *insert evil grin here*
6/29/2016 c1 killermemester
Rpg-7 is russian use the stinger or javelin
6/29/2016 c1 killermemester
'Murica
6/29/2016 c1 3WannabeSoldier
Nick's POV was more like a 3rd Person POV
6/28/2016 c1 2AK74FU2
Huh... interesting...
6/28/2016 c1 1TopHatGuy
hmmm... Good, just try not to put author notes in the middle of the chapter, it breaks the immersion. Otherwise, good job!
6/28/2016 c1 2Grenadier 658244-526455
Nice set up. Much better then My attempt. Though we have very diffrent end goals. Your probably not going to kill off your characters in a brutal unforgiving warzone once known as Vale.
6/28/2016 c1 17Omniczar
Main issue here:

Army Ranks do not equal Navy Ranks. A second Lieutenant does not exist in the Navy. It's called an Ensign in the Navy.
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