for the pokemon that is also a human5/31/2023 c1 
2Kitsuneforlife0
I wanna say cassidy and buch bunch. I don't know how to spell his name because didn't cassidy have a espeon
2Kitsuneforlife0I wanna say cassidy and buch bunch. I don't know how to spell his name because didn't cassidy have a espeon
5/4/2022 c5 Zara1017
PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY SOON PRETTY PLEASE DON'T LET IT BE FORGOTTEN
PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY SOON PRETTY PLEASE DON'T LET IT BE FORGOTTEN
6/13/2020 c5 Guest
Update please
Update please
5/27/2020 c5 JB
please update.
please update.
5/11/2020 c5 Guest
Are you going to update this
Are you going to update this
1/17/2020 c5 Guest
You d say who delia mum was
You d say who delia mum was
1/15/2020 c2 Guest
Spelling of names are wrong eevee and sinnoh not evee sinoh
Spelling of names are wrong eevee and sinnoh not evee sinoh
11/14/2018 c5 Guest
Could you do a pokemon and my little pony crossover story pairings AshXTwilight.
Could you do a pokemon and my little pony crossover story pairings AshXTwilight.
3/7/2018 c1 1FluffyLillian
What the actual fuck is this? Learn some proper grammar and punctuation. No one just speaks without stopping. Which of these sentences look right to you?
"Hi Im ash and I like pokemon and I like never combing my hair!"
Or
"Hi, I'm Ash. I like pokemon and never combing my hair."
You're welcome, use this knowledge for future stories.
1FluffyLillianWhat the actual fuck is this? Learn some proper grammar and punctuation. No one just speaks without stopping. Which of these sentences look right to you?
"Hi Im ash and I like pokemon and I like never combing my hair!"
Or
"Hi, I'm Ash. I like pokemon and never combing my hair."
You're welcome, use this knowledge for future stories.
1/6/2018 c2 2lazy2login
Good job but try to do a little research on the names and stuff cuz "evee" is actually Eevee and " "shaymen" is shaymin; you were close tho. Also what eeveelution (eevee evolution/evolution of eevee) did the eevee turn into cuz it sounds like a fire type but the only fire type eeveelution is flareon which looks like a bigger eevee that is mainly red with tan fur on its neck, top of the head shaped like a flame and a tan tail also shaped like a flame
Good job but try to do a little research on the names and stuff cuz "evee" is actually Eevee and " "shaymen" is shaymin; you were close tho. Also what eeveelution (eevee evolution/evolution of eevee) did the eevee turn into cuz it sounds like a fire type but the only fire type eeveelution is flareon which looks like a bigger eevee that is mainly red with tan fur on its neck, top of the head shaped like a flame and a tan tail also shaped like a flame
12/19/2017 c2 ConCrit
Hi, not that i want you to feel like this story is bad or anything, but it would make the story so much easier to read if there were more paragraph breaks in it. One massive blob of text is intimidating for me and I am a veteran reader. If you take this under advisement then it will make it much easier to read.
Thanks for reading! _
Hi, not that i want you to feel like this story is bad or anything, but it would make the story so much easier to read if there were more paragraph breaks in it. One massive blob of text is intimidating for me and I am a veteran reader. If you take this under advisement then it will make it much easier to read.
Thanks for reading! _
9/14/2017 c5 Guest
So who is Delia's mom
So who is Delia's mom