for Fate and Choice6/11 c70 Laurie Kenneth
Every word feels like it belongs exactly where it is . You have a rare talent for rhythm and flow in storytelling. Your creativity really shines through in this story. It’s so original and refreshing to read something that feels so different from everything else out there. You’ve got a true gift for storytelling!
Every word feels like it belongs exactly where it is . You have a rare talent for rhythm and flow in storytelling. Your creativity really shines through in this story. It’s so original and refreshing to read something that feels so different from everything else out there. You’ve got a true gift for storytelling!
1/17 c70 
8AddyTonks957.42
Two stories in two days that made me cry! I've loved this book from the very beginning so thank you for this gift!
8AddyTonks957.42Two stories in two days that made me cry! I've loved this book from the very beginning so thank you for this gift!
9/6/2024 c70 Cyan
It has taken me like five years but I finally got around to finishing this fic. And let me tell you, the nostalgia of the first 39 chapters was amazing. When it got brought up that one of the QDA was the dark lord, I was very much hoping it wasn't Blaise and it was just a thought, like what if it was Theodore? But I knew, I was just glad it ended well. Thx you author for hurting my heart and making me laugh
It has taken me like five years but I finally got around to finishing this fic. And let me tell you, the nostalgia of the first 39 chapters was amazing. When it got brought up that one of the QDA was the dark lord, I was very much hoping it wasn't Blaise and it was just a thought, like what if it was Theodore? But I knew, I was just glad it ended well. Thx you author for hurting my heart and making me laugh
8/25/2024 c8 17xXFrostKittenXx
Any chance of the thing with Foyet becoming a oneshot? That would be hilarious.
This is probably one of my favorite chapters because of the Monster Book antics!
17xXFrostKittenXxAny chance of the thing with Foyet becoming a oneshot? That would be hilarious.
This is probably one of my favorite chapters because of the Monster Book antics!
1/8/2023 c14 1InARealPickle
I wanted to love this story but I just can't. It makes no sense logically. Hotch can prove via DNA testing that Harry is his son. There is zero reason for them to hide that beyond the author's desire to create drama using this pointless plothole.
Also, no way any parent would send their kidnapped child BACK to the country that kidnapped him to spend more than half the year there. America has schools too. There was no reason for Harry to go back to a situation that Hotch Knew was dangerous. Harry wanted to go? Well Boo-freaking-hoo
It's called PARENTING
1InARealPickleI wanted to love this story but I just can't. It makes no sense logically. Hotch can prove via DNA testing that Harry is his son. There is zero reason for them to hide that beyond the author's desire to create drama using this pointless plothole.
Also, no way any parent would send their kidnapped child BACK to the country that kidnapped him to spend more than half the year there. America has schools too. There was no reason for Harry to go back to a situation that Hotch Knew was dangerous. Harry wanted to go? Well Boo-freaking-hoo
It's called PARENTING
12/10/2022 c1 4IridianRae
By the way, I need more storyline with Blue the patronus. That was my all time favorite character. Please don't be upset if a random blue like patrumus starts to appear in my stories. it would only be an homage to your skill.
4IridianRaeBy the way, I need more storyline with Blue the patronus. That was my all time favorite character. Please don't be upset if a random blue like patrumus starts to appear in my stories. it would only be an homage to your skill.
12/10/2022 c70 IridianRae
Holy... wow. First off let me just say that it's been YEARS since a story has taken me on such an emotional rollercoaster. I felt like I was truly a part of this tale. I laughed with the characters, cried with them, learned with them and grew with them. I even bawled at the finality of the ending, and smiled while I did it, because it was PERFECT. I cannot praise you enough for your story, your wonderfully strong literary prose. Watching Hotch and Harry grow and watching Hotch be such an amazing dad was only pert of it. You managed to infuse every bit of the BAU with the correct personality and not even a bit of it was ooc. Rossi and his sly ways, Reids overexcitability, Morgans protective streak, Garcias funny lovable self, Elle and her inability to stand injustice and her temper, JJ and her interactions with Reid, Prentiss and her funny remarks, Gideon and how calm and steady he always seemed before Frank and Hotch and his cool headed assessment of almost every situation and how different he was at home. I am saving this story as one of my all time favorites and I couldn't have found a better way to start my journey into this crossover genre if I had even tried! Cudos to you for such a gripping and heart warming tale. Please, if you are able to, continue to write, the world NEEDS authors like you. If you wrote your own book, you would have a fan in me.
Holy... wow. First off let me just say that it's been YEARS since a story has taken me on such an emotional rollercoaster. I felt like I was truly a part of this tale. I laughed with the characters, cried with them, learned with them and grew with them. I even bawled at the finality of the ending, and smiled while I did it, because it was PERFECT. I cannot praise you enough for your story, your wonderfully strong literary prose. Watching Hotch and Harry grow and watching Hotch be such an amazing dad was only pert of it. You managed to infuse every bit of the BAU with the correct personality and not even a bit of it was ooc. Rossi and his sly ways, Reids overexcitability, Morgans protective streak, Garcias funny lovable self, Elle and her inability to stand injustice and her temper, JJ and her interactions with Reid, Prentiss and her funny remarks, Gideon and how calm and steady he always seemed before Frank and Hotch and his cool headed assessment of almost every situation and how different he was at home. I am saving this story as one of my all time favorites and I couldn't have found a better way to start my journey into this crossover genre if I had even tried! Cudos to you for such a gripping and heart warming tale. Please, if you are able to, continue to write, the world NEEDS authors like you. If you wrote your own book, you would have a fan in me.
2/26/2022 c70 4SilverMidas
Awesome story. it made me cry and laugh. Especially that point with Foyet and Blue. My mother thought I was choking because I was trying to muffle giggles.
4SilverMidasAwesome story. it made me cry and laugh. Especially that point with Foyet and Blue. My mother thought I was choking because I was trying to muffle giggles.