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9/19/2016 c3 Mari
Whats creepy unicorn thing. I'm not good with naming (I'm guessing that this thing will appear in person as in not in a dream/nightmare? Since you need to name it.)
9/19/2016 c1 Mari
Quick question, didn't Dru's family, consisted of Uncle, Mother and two sisters? At least that was stated in BtVS Wiki.
Otherwise, and great first chapter. I kike how you are building Drusilla's family dynamic.
9/19/2016 c2 Mari
I kind of feel sorry for Dru's family. And Drusilla. But you managed to portray her "knowing" that staying in church was dangerous. So I'm guessing that as soon as she was out, there was no praying, she just run away? I hope, I read this right.
And boy was Angelus creepy in this chapter.
7/31/2016 c3 Allen Pitt
People tend to forget that each 'evil vampire' encountered in the Bvs series was once a person. Seeing the 'before' is always a bit weird. Giving her a soul later on...yeesh, years of therapy needed.

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