for Broken Battered And Not Whelmed1/18/2021 c1 Guest
I’m gonna go yeet some corrupt cop out a window now.
I’m gonna go yeet some corrupt cop out a window now.
10/20/2016 c10 
30elisuni
Aw! I like it, I don't review often, but I too am surprised this doesn't have more reviews... ): Well written and nice storyline. and I use "dolt" all the time, to be honest... :) Like your story!
30elisuniAw! I like it, I don't review often, but I too am surprised this doesn't have more reviews... ): Well written and nice storyline. and I use "dolt" all the time, to be honest... :) Like your story!
7/18/2016 c10 Guest
This is really good ! It made my heart hurt, hit me right in the feels :(
This is really good ! It made my heart hurt, hit me right in the feels :(
7/5/2016 c8 20Multidimensional Scribe
I'm supposed this doesn't have more reviews. The writing is good and so is the plot. It's paced nicely. The only criticism so far is that Batman wouldn't have easily confessed to Roy. Actually he wouldn't confessed to Roy at all. He would do it with Alfred or his close friends in the League like Superman. Also keep in mind of the nationality of the characters. Roy is American so he wouldn't use the word bloody in anger (Americans only use that word in that context when trying to sound British) and Wally, also American, wouldn't use dolt. He would use idiot.
20Multidimensional ScribeI'm supposed this doesn't have more reviews. The writing is good and so is the plot. It's paced nicely. The only criticism so far is that Batman wouldn't have easily confessed to Roy. Actually he wouldn't confessed to Roy at all. He would do it with Alfred or his close friends in the League like Superman. Also keep in mind of the nationality of the characters. Roy is American so he wouldn't use the word bloody in anger (Americans only use that word in that context when trying to sound British) and Wally, also American, wouldn't use dolt. He would use idiot.
7/2/2016 c10 Guest of honor
That was sweet and also really good.
That was sweet and also really good.