for A Year Too Soon4/29 c2 Pat9921
why oh why do you have to do the whole house lord thing? god that is just do cringe and so out of canon. there is nothing that states that the potters were noble and old money. they are new money man, they got their money by inventing potions.
a potter married a peveral some time in 1600s to 1700s, but it no way states that they eer noble or whatever, we are told they had money due to harry's ancestor creating a potion that was a precursor to skelegrow.
ughhh, please dont do the whole lord and politics crap in this fic, it is an interesting fic so far.
also the vault in canon is the main potter vault, there was no trust vault said in canon at anytime and anywhere.. god it is just so annoying when people do this for simply no reason just to fit an indiotic trope.
why oh why do you have to do the whole house lord thing? god that is just do cringe and so out of canon. there is nothing that states that the potters were noble and old money. they are new money man, they got their money by inventing potions.
a potter married a peveral some time in 1600s to 1700s, but it no way states that they eer noble or whatever, we are told they had money due to harry's ancestor creating a potion that was a precursor to skelegrow.
ughhh, please dont do the whole lord and politics crap in this fic, it is an interesting fic so far.
also the vault in canon is the main potter vault, there was no trust vault said in canon at anytime and anywhere.. god it is just so annoying when people do this for simply no reason just to fit an indiotic trope.
4/1 c82 
3Scabbers1957
I still continue to be enthralled (my big word of the day) with the twists n turns of this story. I'll add tis to my story favorites n alerts to see what happens next.
:))
3Scabbers1957I still continue to be enthralled (my big word of the day) with the twists n turns of this story. I'll add tis to my story favorites n alerts to see what happens next.
:))
3/27 c82 Brockster550
Good to see Harry and the twins practicing different kinds of spells in preparation for the second task. He hardly did a thing in canon and only got by out of sheer dumb luck. I can see some spells behaving differently underwater. The singing dwarves was certainly a Lockhart thing. I can’t wait to see how the second task plays out. Great chapter, keep up the hard work!
Good to see Harry and the twins practicing different kinds of spells in preparation for the second task. He hardly did a thing in canon and only got by out of sheer dumb luck. I can see some spells behaving differently underwater. The singing dwarves was certainly a Lockhart thing. I can’t wait to see how the second task plays out. Great chapter, keep up the hard work!
3/26 c82 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.