for The hunter of the wizards2/10/2020 c1 Yeah
Yeah, umm. No offence? But that writing? That was shit. Maybe read a dictionary or something. Just... Get BETTER before you write again, please, for my bleeding eyes and your dignity. Bye!
Yeah, umm. No offence? But that writing? That was shit. Maybe read a dictionary or something. Just... Get BETTER before you write again, please, for my bleeding eyes and your dignity. Bye!
5/30/2017 c1 bluebear3983
this appears to be something you don't plan on continuing, however it is rather interesting, and I am rather curious on how everything else would be affected by this, and would love to see Harry start his journey and what happens after
this appears to be something you don't plan on continuing, however it is rather interesting, and I am rather curious on how everything else would be affected by this, and would love to see Harry start his journey and what happens after
11/5/2016 c1 TheArchive
Is this a troll story or something? The grammar, spelling, plot, and just the quality in general is just unreadable.
Is this a troll story or something? The grammar, spelling, plot, and just the quality in general is just unreadable.
7/10/2016 c1 
3Demon Scarlet
F***ing awesome dude. This is something I would love to read more. Not a lot of people do crossovers like this. Keep up the good work and also I agree with kuma-fury19 the paragraph is a little long. Try branching out the paragraph.
3Demon ScarletF***ing awesome dude. This is something I would love to read more. Not a lot of people do crossovers like this. Keep up the good work and also I agree with kuma-fury19 the paragraph is a little long. Try branching out the paragraph.
7/5/2016 c1 1KUMA-Fury19
Yes! Bloodborne and Harry Potter! So happy :). Anyway great intro so far. Though I hope you make future paragraphs smaller than this because it is hard to read.
1KUMA-Fury19Yes! Bloodborne and Harry Potter! So happy :). Anyway great intro so far. Though I hope you make future paragraphs smaller than this because it is hard to read.