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5/27/2018 c2 Obsidian Prime
YES, also, how 'bout bumping the rating up a maturity level and adding some "stuff" eh? ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡) XD
5/4/2018 c2 Guest
update it please
8/20/2017 c2 killjoy4life4
Got to say i see so much potential in this it makes me shake i cant wait to see the next chapter and your work beyond that.
8/28/2016 c2 crazyboy358
Fantastic chapter, can't wait for the next one. Good show, jolly good show
7/24/2016 c1 Guest
I can see you tried. Hard. But, speaking of and in regard to the first chapter only, there is still a distinctive lack of focus that which blurs the length of the tale to a featureless medley of odd events. The illustration of the background and history is undefining and weak, the details and minute observations practically nonexistent. The style, at least, is great in improvement. Perhaps plan ahead with a little more dramatic plot development in the future.
7/22/2016 c1 Guikoi
Wait... his name is Daniel? though all the kids in Winter's generation and younger were named after things that related to a color of some sort, or is Daniel a color?
7/18/2016 c2 Spartacusj23
i will admit it's an odd concept for the story, but i am nterested to see where it goes in the future. Look forward to seeing more
7/13/2016 c2 25Le MAO XXVI
So Daniel got to see some action from Mercer...and some "action" from Blake. Bow chica bow wow!

I would call that OOC of her, but considering the dark and adult themes that will be present in this story, I'm all for it. And of course Yang's starting to get some ideas.

Daniel...don't get any philandering ideas now! You belong to Winter! Sure, Winter did the same thing, but she was depressed! After all...

On second thought, screw it. Let him sleep with everyone before settling down with Winter. Now THERE'S some adult theme for ya.

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Actually, never mind. Don't do that. Forget I even suggested that. Sure, he got lucky with Blake, but let that be it. I can expect Yang to try some advances on the guy, but he might try to resist...

Wait, does he even realize he slept with a student? A minor no less?

Uh oh...

Then again, considering the profession of Huntsmen and Huntresses and the threat of the Grimm, perhaps the law is SLIGHTLY more lenient about the age thing, making it 17 instead of 18. A writer did that once. Can't remember the fic.

Can't wait for Daniel to meet Weiss, since I'm pretty sure she's at Beacon.

I know you said no spoilers, but I'm saying this anyway.

I SHIP DANIEL/WINTER!

Ah~, good. Got that outta my system.

What can I say? I'm a sucker for the kind of story where an on-the-side love is tested and stands strong despite the obstacles.

Yes, I know a pairing isn't the top priority, I'm just saying.

And I've always been on the site. Writing my own stories, reading others and reviewing. Always their, where you least expect it.

Maybe even...right BEHIND YOU!

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Hah. Made ya look.
7/12/2016 c2 Ani89
Holy CRAP! That was niiiice B) I might go for a harem consisting of team RWBY...if that's what your going for if not I'm still cool with it.
7/12/2016 c2 1TenWing
Damn Blake's getting HEATED lol had to put that by the way great job on the reboot
7/12/2016 c2 XXX Chaos Breaker XXX
The fanfiction look great so far i hope you give him new abilities i also hope you make the paring interesting
7/12/2016 c2 Darkuz
Daniel is 19 and rwby is 15 quite the age gap!
7/12/2016 c2 J0ker981
Dat lime tho
7/8/2016 c1 Ani89
Not bad man I love it. I just hope you keep DanielXRuby...if that's alright?
7/8/2016 c1 J0ker981
Holy shit dis sooo good fucking 9999999/10
-IGN
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