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9/29/2018 c9 10Chronos0305
I must say, you are doing a good job. Have you heard about FusionFall Retro and Legacy. I am guessing you probably have. I really hope you are still doing this, it's a great story. I can't wait to see Mark alter the past and prevent the deaths that have happened. As I always say looking forward to the next chapter.
6/7/2018 c13 2aslan333
great 5 chapters.
1/27/2018 c12 67Ways
This took me a while. But great job. I look forward to more.
1/11/2018 c1 1August Rexplama
Truly good story you've got, Ace! Keep up the great work!

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1/6/2018 c12 Afreindlyreader
:O This is an awesome fic! It's good to see some good fanfiction in an otherwise dead fandom. I really hope that you will continue this! It was a pleasure to read.
1/1/2018 c12 2aslan333
great chapter and very detailed battle scene.
12/1/2017 c11 67Ways
Good chapter. I gotta say, the characterization for this chapter really, really was above and beyond. Not just for the preexisting characters, but everybody. It was the little things like Mandark arguing over redoing the machine or Gumball doing the thing about the jinx. It was a fun chapter because of the characters. And hey, you introduced Robot Jones and we got a little bit of Boomer which is cool. Honestly, the characters just really made this chapter and made it a joy to read.
And I'm done. That was a fun read for this week, I had fun with it. I really look forward to more.
12/1/2017 c10 Ways
A lot of talk on death in this chapter.
First, let's talk about Darwin.
I feel you did a very good job at letting out Gumball's pain there. Poor guy. Darwin definitely doesn't deserve to die and Gumball definitely doesn't deserve that pain. You did a really great job at that scene.
As for Blossom and Bubbles, I think you did even better with Buttercup. She was great and her emotions were strong. That's good. You wrote her well.
The story of Belladonna was interesting. I liked it.
And as for the end, ho boy. Mandark. That's gonna be fun. I can't wait to see how that goes down.
You did a good job. And I look forward to the next chapter. Just one more and I'm caught up.
12/1/2017 c9 Ways
This was nice.
I'm glad Mark was able to let it all out. He needed to considering it all.
Aside from the OMGs which are forgivable because he's 8, Andrew was just so great in this chapter. So pure. So precious I loved him. His abilities are an interesting development and I'm very curious to see where this goes and what the extent of his powers are.
But the end with everyone is nice. I really enjoyed just seeing them recuperate to everything. From the picture, to the pizza, to the toast. Everything. It was all just very, very nice.
Good job and I look forward to more.
12/1/2017 c8 Ways
First thing I wanna comment on is the fact that Darwin isn't there with them and fuck, no. Not Darwin, out of anyone he doesn't deserve this if what I'm thinking is true. And that must've messed the heck out of Gumball. I hope Darwin's okay. But I doubt it.
But that aside, this was a good chapter. Good to see the brother's reunion and all. It made me happy. And the revelation of his powers is interesting. I'm curious as to the why and where you'll go with this.
I also really enjoyed the KND flashbacks for Andrew.
And I think arguably the best part was the recommissioning. Like all those memories, I did not expect an Operation ZERO flashback, but it was cool. I really enjoyed seeing Mark's journey with the KND so nice one.
I'm curious as always and excited to see where this goes, good job.
12/1/2017 c7 Ways
And suddenly Gumball. Fun chapter. Good to know that Mark has all of what's left of his friends back. Sad stories of how they died. Excited to see where this goes.
12/1/2017 c6 Ways
Now that was a wild ride. I loved it. So much happened and it was great. I knew they would leave Dexter behind, but damn. That sucks. And I loved seeing Atomix. The battles were well written aside from a few flubups. Once again, same issue as before, unnecessary info. But less frequent.
Still, I had a fun time and you did a good job.
12/1/2017 c5 Ways
Should've known Aiden would die. So sad. But it looks like it gave Mark what he needed to fight. I like it. Good motivation. And a nano too.
You really showed off the war very very well here.
And a nano too? Awesome.
This was a good read. Good job.
12/1/2017 c4 Ways
Woo! Lots of action and I loved it. We finally found Evan and I guess Buttercup too. That's cool. I can't wait to see what's next.
12/1/2017 c3 Ways
And now he's in the future and fuse is talking to him.
Curious. Good job.
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