for Bend or broken- it's a family tree3/13/2017 c13 Guest
I like it but felt you should develop side characters. You have them all hooking up but no explanation of why their caracters mesh. You have David tell Emma that the only grandparent who would love her is dead but then have same grandparent block MM from telling David about Emma you have Emma ice MM for withholding Emma's existence but she forgives Ingrid for withholding info about MM much more easily. You should have included more on the raproachment between MM and Emma. I don't know why people get worked up about baby names but Leo makes perfect sense.
I like it but felt you should develop side characters. You have them all hooking up but no explanation of why their caracters mesh. You have David tell Emma that the only grandparent who would love her is dead but then have same grandparent block MM from telling David about Emma you have Emma ice MM for withholding Emma's existence but she forgives Ingrid for withholding info about MM much more easily. You should have included more on the raproachment between MM and Emma. I don't know why people get worked up about baby names but Leo makes perfect sense.
3/4/2017 c13 Guest
Great story until the end with the Snowing baby name. Gross. Leo. The one name David said in canon that he wouldn't name HIS child. I wish people would get creative qnd quit naming the Snowing child the ONE NAME his father doesn't like. It's completely disrespectful to the character of David.
Great story until the end with the Snowing baby name. Gross. Leo. The one name David said in canon that he wouldn't name HIS child. I wish people would get creative qnd quit naming the Snowing child the ONE NAME his father doesn't like. It's completely disrespectful to the character of David.
3/2/2017 c12 
3EF22
Absolutely amazing so far. I love your story. Can't wait for more. Also, so glad you made Killian finally propose.
3EF22Absolutely amazing so far. I love your story. Can't wait for more. Also, so glad you made Killian finally propose.
3/2/2017 c12 26oncer4life11
Very good chapter. Aww yay now Emma and Killian might be having a baby together.
26oncer4life11Very good chapter. Aww yay now Emma and Killian might be having a baby together.
3/1/2017 c10 Guest
I just started reading this yesterday and I couldn't stop reading this it's so good I can't wait to read more chapters
I just started reading this yesterday and I couldn't stop reading this it's so good I can't wait to read more chapters
2/28/2017 c10 Mesha
I feel sorry for das to See this Story endin was Kinda hoping you would dig more into the snowings Love but i understand
I feel sorry for das to See this Story endin was Kinda hoping you would dig more into the snowings Love but i understand
2/28/2017 c10 Guest
I thought the way you developed Emma and David's relationship was well written. Sorry, you decided to end it abruptly. Would have liked to see you develop MM and Emma relationship and restablish David and MM. it is tough to do these difficult scenes in just three more chapters. You may be more of a Daddy Charming fan.
I thought the way you developed Emma and David's relationship was well written. Sorry, you decided to end it abruptly. Would have liked to see you develop MM and Emma relationship and restablish David and MM. it is tough to do these difficult scenes in just three more chapters. You may be more of a Daddy Charming fan.
2/28/2017 c10 Guest
Mate, don't listen to the hate, I like this story and enjoy reading the new chapters :)
Mate, don't listen to the hate, I like this story and enjoy reading the new chapters :)
2/28/2017 c10 Guest
I hope Emma forgives Ingrid.
I hope Emma forgives Ingrid.
2/28/2017 c10 Guest
It's one of my favorite Charming Family stories so I am glad you are finishing it.
It's one of my favorite Charming Family stories so I am glad you are finishing it.
2/28/2017 c9 Arrrrgh
Can't wait for another update.
Can't wait for another update.
2/16/2017 c9 Guest
I apologize for initially dismissing the direction of your story. It may not be the way I would write the story but this last chapter reveals you have your own vision. I hope others who were angered by your portrayal and seeming scapegoating of MM will return to read this story.
I apologize for initially dismissing the direction of your story. It may not be the way I would write the story but this last chapter reveals you have your own vision. I hope others who were angered by your portrayal and seeming scapegoating of MM will return to read this story.