for Forged Destiny9/29 c13 zeen121
So two main problems. One, how does the economy function? In something like Danmachi, it works because the resource they get from the monsters is consumed, thus they would always need more. It works in The Gamer because only a handful of people are able to do it. However here, unless they burn the lien or something, you would eventually get hit with inflation something fierce.
And two, I feel like they gave up on reporting the scam too easily. You can often tell when damage like that have been sitting for a while, so there's no way I believe if Beacon decided to investigate that whatever class they put in charged wouldn't have been able to tell that the damage is too old for them to have done it. And there's no way I think they wouldn't have even at least looked into it if they explained the situation and just decided that they were in the wrong. Even taking into the fact that they are dumb, inexperienced kids, it's kind of a hard pill to swallow. The only thing I can think they thought is that Beacon wouldn't care and would just bring down the hammer without even truly looking into it.
Few other minor things, but overall, I'm enjoying the story. Hard to find someone who not only has interesting ideals but is a good enough writer to realize it.
So two main problems. One, how does the economy function? In something like Danmachi, it works because the resource they get from the monsters is consumed, thus they would always need more. It works in The Gamer because only a handful of people are able to do it. However here, unless they burn the lien or something, you would eventually get hit with inflation something fierce.
And two, I feel like they gave up on reporting the scam too easily. You can often tell when damage like that have been sitting for a while, so there's no way I believe if Beacon decided to investigate that whatever class they put in charged wouldn't have been able to tell that the damage is too old for them to have done it. And there's no way I think they wouldn't have even at least looked into it if they explained the situation and just decided that they were in the wrong. Even taking into the fact that they are dumb, inexperienced kids, it's kind of a hard pill to swallow. The only thing I can think they thought is that Beacon wouldn't care and would just bring down the hammer without even truly looking into it.
Few other minor things, but overall, I'm enjoying the story. Hard to find someone who not only has interesting ideals but is a good enough writer to realize it.
9/26 c35 Kodaking
bro if he doesnt have a cool ass fire sword by the end of this novel imma be pissed he has the abilities
bro if he doesnt have a cool ass fire sword by the end of this novel imma be pissed he has the abilities
9/13 c43 AvirRapter
Ight, that solidifies itwhoever these greycloaks are, they have an _immaculate_ sense of drip. Masks and hooded cloaks on plate armour are some of the most fashionable things you could mix.
Ight, that solidifies itwhoever these greycloaks are, they have an _immaculate_ sense of drip. Masks and hooded cloaks on plate armour are some of the most fashionable things you could mix.
9/13 c25 AvirRapter
Oh, dear. Funky combination from the 4th Grail War you have here; I rather like it.
Does she come with E-rank Luck as well?
Oh, dear. Funky combination from the 4th Grail War you have here; I rather like it.
Does she come with E-rank Luck as well?
9/13 c24 AvirRapter
You joke, but to be completely honest, I wouldn't mind getting spinoffs or somesuch of Forged Destiny. I feel like there'd be some pairings that would be interesting to see your take on in this AU, Blake and Jaune being only one of them.
You joke, but to be completely honest, I wouldn't mind getting spinoffs or somesuch of Forged Destiny. I feel like there'd be some pairings that would be interesting to see your take on in this AU, Blake and Jaune being only one of them.
9/12 c1 AvirRapter
I will imagine that he at least made a helmetthe most mandatory of mandatoriesfor my own sanity.
I will imagine that he at least made a helmetthe most mandatory of mandatoriesfor my own sanity.
9/6 c157 Guest
Genuinely one of the best stories I’ve ever read I started reading it expecting to barely get through it but the chapters just flew by deaths were handled well but the main cast being left complete physically fine left me slightly disappointed but even then instead focusing on the mental aspects of a life like this worked nearly just as well but overall best story I’ve read hands down
Genuinely one of the best stories I’ve ever read I started reading it expecting to barely get through it but the chapters just flew by deaths were handled well but the main cast being left complete physically fine left me slightly disappointed but even then instead focusing on the mental aspects of a life like this worked nearly just as well but overall best story I’ve read hands down
9/6 c46 
1Exceedes
My god, the last five chapters were soooo bad. Nothing made sense. Everyone was dumb. Torchwick plan was bad from the very start.
First of all, everyone that attacked Torchwick should (would) be expelled. It doesn't matter if you had good reason or not. No school is going to allow the students to resolve problems with their own hands and let get away with it.
Second, it's impossible for Oz to not know what's happening FOR YEARS. Not even going to elaborate.
Third, Ever since the first chapter that Torchwick appeared. WHY NOT TALK TO A TEACHER. EVER. ABOUT ANYTHING. And even when it became clear that there's probably someone like an illusionist or when it was obvious there was some kind of mind control ability(with a clone of Jaune making contracts, he even had alibi).
Four, you just made them stupid to fit the narrative. The levels of intelligence are always inconsistent. Ever since Ruby signed that contract they should've suspected of mind control. They are intelligent young adults, but every single time this plotline come back they have to hold the potato of stupidity.
Five. The staff, I can't believe Oz let the Merchants stay with the staff. It's your fault that your students had to bargain to get help against what's essentially a super criminal, the least you can do is say: No, they won't give you the staff because they should not have needed to offer in the first place.
Six. It's obvious that the author doesn't understand how contracts work, if a contract is made in bad faith, it can be null. That kind of thing exist, in one way or another, all over the world for a reason.
Seven: How the hell those three were able to escape. HOW THE HELLLLLLL
1ExceedesMy god, the last five chapters were soooo bad. Nothing made sense. Everyone was dumb. Torchwick plan was bad from the very start.
First of all, everyone that attacked Torchwick should (would) be expelled. It doesn't matter if you had good reason or not. No school is going to allow the students to resolve problems with their own hands and let get away with it.
Second, it's impossible for Oz to not know what's happening FOR YEARS. Not even going to elaborate.
Third, Ever since the first chapter that Torchwick appeared. WHY NOT TALK TO A TEACHER. EVER. ABOUT ANYTHING. And even when it became clear that there's probably someone like an illusionist or when it was obvious there was some kind of mind control ability(with a clone of Jaune making contracts, he even had alibi).
Four, you just made them stupid to fit the narrative. The levels of intelligence are always inconsistent. Ever since Ruby signed that contract they should've suspected of mind control. They are intelligent young adults, but every single time this plotline come back they have to hold the potato of stupidity.
Five. The staff, I can't believe Oz let the Merchants stay with the staff. It's your fault that your students had to bargain to get help against what's essentially a super criminal, the least you can do is say: No, they won't give you the staff because they should not have needed to offer in the first place.
Six. It's obvious that the author doesn't understand how contracts work, if a contract is made in bad faith, it can be null. That kind of thing exist, in one way or another, all over the world for a reason.
Seven: How the hell those three were able to escape. HOW THE HELLLLLLL