for Unpretty4/22/2006 c3 mesaqt
keep going it is good
keep going it is good
12/6/2003 c3 icereamlvr
is that just the end of the chapter, or the end of the story?
is that just the end of the chapter, or the end of the story?
12/6/2003 c2 icecreamlvr
ron and harry would never do that!
ron and harry would never do that!
11/26/2003 c3 
2Blue-Dreamz
update soon! luv dis story! baiz, hope nobody makes fun of her n dat she gets her paybak at evraone dat made fun of her n dat she gets popular n stuff like dat. baiz!
2Blue-Dreamzupdate soon! luv dis story! baiz, hope nobody makes fun of her n dat she gets her paybak at evraone dat made fun of her n dat she gets popular n stuff like dat. baiz!
9/26/2003 c2 Forsaken Light
O, you can't leave me hanging there. What does Hermione have? Pease, please update!
O, you can't leave me hanging there. What does Hermione have? Pease, please update!
9/1/2003 c2 Bosson12787
I like this story so far, so please finish it. thanks.
from Bosson12787
I like this story so far, so please finish it. thanks.
from Bosson12787
7/22/2003 c2 Ickle Ronnikens Girlie
I love this story!
I really like Hermione's change of attitude. But I really don't like the way Ron just all of a sudden hates Hermione, but I do like how Harry is having second thoughts!
-Ikkle Ronnikens girlie (aka Sera)
I love this story!
I really like Hermione's change of attitude. But I really don't like the way Ron just all of a sudden hates Hermione, but I do like how Harry is having second thoughts!
-Ikkle Ronnikens girlie (aka Sera)
7/22/2003 c2 sam
this is really good plz continue
this is really good plz continue
7/21/2003 c2 6weasleygurl4
Argh I've been flamed. Ok so maybe I was in kinda a dumb rush to finish the the chapter. It was really nice of some of the reviewers to suggest ideas instead of being mean. So i have decided to rewrite some of it, just to fix some of the mistakes I made that I should've noticed before. You people are right, now that I read the chapter over, it seems as though Hermione is changing just to please others. Although the flames put me in a bad mood, I figure I'll just work in my other stories, while I gather more ideas for improvement. Thanks to everyone who at least took the time to read it!
6weasleygurl4Argh I've been flamed. Ok so maybe I was in kinda a dumb rush to finish the the chapter. It was really nice of some of the reviewers to suggest ideas instead of being mean. So i have decided to rewrite some of it, just to fix some of the mistakes I made that I should've noticed before. You people are right, now that I read the chapter over, it seems as though Hermione is changing just to please others. Although the flames put me in a bad mood, I figure I'll just work in my other stories, while I gather more ideas for improvement. Thanks to everyone who at least took the time to read it!
7/21/2003 c2 truly.blue
hi keri! i haven't had much time to read your story until now and i love it! in the first book/movie ron insulted hermione and she ran into the bathroom to cry. hermione can sometimes be a little unstable, and you showed that. in the books (and movies) we are not able to understand what is going on in her mind because it's written in 3rd person limited. in this story, it's 3rd person omniscent, so we are able to understand why she is making the list and any other reasons for her actions. i like it. it gives the story more background. Continue the story. i like it a lot. and knowing you, you're gonna put some twist in it! ^ ^ i'll wait for that to come!
hi keri! i haven't had much time to read your story until now and i love it! in the first book/movie ron insulted hermione and she ran into the bathroom to cry. hermione can sometimes be a little unstable, and you showed that. in the books (and movies) we are not able to understand what is going on in her mind because it's written in 3rd person limited. in this story, it's 3rd person omniscent, so we are able to understand why she is making the list and any other reasons for her actions. i like it. it gives the story more background. Continue the story. i like it a lot. and knowing you, you're gonna put some twist in it! ^ ^ i'll wait for that to come!