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8/2 c11 bob malone
aw and i got all excited too conlusion please no rush none at all i just like happy endings thanks for your time
4/1/2019 c11 Guest
Waiting (very) patiently
3/22/2019 c4 7Nightshade'sMusings
Lovely chapter, really nicely written and I adore your version of Effy. I do like the plot you've got going and can't wait to see where it goes
3/18/2019 c3 Nightshade'sMusings
I'm gonna start by saying that I adore, what I call, the all knowing Effy from Series 1 and 2. I love the manipulation, Effy. The one who can know things without anyone telling her l. So to have her be the Effy in this story makes me so happy, equally it's interesting to see that she's not quite all knowing. She thought she had it all sorted with Ems and Naomi didn't she? Hope confident Emily isn't gone forever tho, I do like that version of her
3/18/2019 c2 Nightshade'sMusings
Nice hearing Naomi's thoughts, love the makeover of Emily.
3/16/2019 c1 Nightshade'sMusings
Well, seeing as you revoed my writing I thought it was only fair I check yours out.

The sex was very hot I have to admit, very nicely done so well done on that. I suspected it might be Effy but wasn't entirely sure. Happy it is though, Effy only ever seems to get paired with Katie for some reason I've noticed and I like finding other pairings of her.
3/16/2019 c11 24mynameislizzie3
Excellent!
3/12/2019 c11 Guest
Looking forward to it!
3/12/2019 c7 Guest
Stupid twat Emily!
3/10/2019 c5 1tigertrap
Rereading this story as I had lost the plot (terrible pun intended) since the last update. Loving this so far. Again :)
2/28/2019 c11 40Cuthbert72
Nice chapter, after a considerable interval. I like that you have brought the rather nervous JJ into this ans got him to admit that Shagging Emily was a one-off. I await the resolution to this one.

I, too am restarting a (crossover) story after a very long interval, so don't feel too bad.
3/17/2017 c10 2dietcokeandlime
I always love reading what you write...you know that. I particularly like this one...you know back to roots and such. I really hope you do finish it. I'm dying to hear what happens next. As always your writing makes me feel like I'm there, watching everything unfold. I mean it would be a pleasure to be there with one blonde beauty and a delicious redhead
3/11/2017 c1 dietcokeandlime
Someone sure knows how to write and Jesus first chapter and I'm already hooked! Only you could make me believe it was Naomi until the last second :)
12/23/2016 c10 7TheAeacusProject
At some point in the not-too-distant past I know I promised reviews. Did I not? I know I did. So here's the first.

Fantastic job so far. Truly. I checked the other reviews-and not to beat a dead horse-but they're all spot on. Stop acting like you're not a very good writer and embrace being one of the really talented ones left. Us torchbearers have to stick together! You have an uncanny knack for turning a phrase or coming up with a completely unique yet accurate and accessible way of describing feelings or circumstances and it's a joy to read. I'll admit my hesitant at first not wanting to jump into a smut fest; nevertheless, there are onion-like layers here and it's a great story. Unlike some other readers/writers, I'm a proponent of Effily in certain circumstances and this would be the second story in which I genuinely feel like it works (the first being the incredible Transatlanticism).

So please, Pete's sake, finish this at some point!
9/12/2016 c10 Guest
Bless kff, lol! Hoping Naomi goes for the soap option! So loving this!
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