for HP & The Jade Dragon9/23/2024 c101 
3horcruxquillfanfic
So, in general, I like what you're doing with this story. Not a huge fan of the endless apologies and I'm wondering if you're going to be able to get through the story given that with the amount of excessive detail and expanding storylines this thing is going to have to be like 10M words but good luck and I'll follow along.
3horcruxquillfanficSo, in general, I like what you're doing with this story. Not a huge fan of the endless apologies and I'm wondering if you're going to be able to get through the story given that with the amount of excessive detail and expanding storylines this thing is going to have to be like 10M words but good luck and I'll follow along.
5/6/2024 c65 adam.rosen.51
the only thing about the gold bars is that this could cause inflation if the goblins are changing the value of certain volume of gold.
the only thing about the gold bars is that this could cause inflation if the goblins are changing the value of certain volume of gold.
1/16/2024 c75 60EdTheBeast
Found a crungerty error. Hero was with Harry, but was also at the training being put in charge with Hester and Hero in charge.
60EdTheBeastFound a crungerty error. Hero was with Harry, but was also at the training being put in charge with Hester and Hero in charge.
9/5/2023 c5 Anon
This is just too familiar for me. Thanks for the effort.
This is just too familiar for me. Thanks for the effort.
11/6/2022 c73 KeepUpK
I have just started reading the story so it might seem stupid to read this comment but...
In chapter 73 I don't think Harry should always grovel to Hermione. I get that he loves her and wants her to be happy but she doesn't exactly has 100% rights to be mad at him for being with someone else.
I have just started reading the story so it might seem stupid to read this comment but...
In chapter 73 I don't think Harry should always grovel to Hermione. I get that he loves her and wants her to be happy but she doesn't exactly has 100% rights to be mad at him for being with someone else.
10/11/2022 c95 Jimhh
I really like your fiction but it's moving really slow, I also think that your dragging the relationship between harry and hermoney unnecessarily out to the extreme but I am enjoying the fiction though too many females are infatuated with Harry.
I really like your fiction but it's moving really slow, I also think that your dragging the relationship between harry and hermoney unnecessarily out to the extreme but I am enjoying the fiction though too many females are infatuated with Harry.
6/13/2022 c66 K
Definitely not losing my interest!
Definitely not losing my interest!
6/14/2022 c101 Hedwig68
This has to be one of the best stories if have read on Fanfiction.
Defiantly Going into my favourites.
Keep up the great Work.
This has to be one of the best stories if have read on Fanfiction.
Defiantly Going into my favourites.
Keep up the great Work.
6/12/2022 c58 K
It is a very enjoyable story, and if some people don’t like how it is developing, then they aren’t forced to read it! Personally I’m very much liking it.
It is a very enjoyable story, and if some people don’t like how it is developing, then they aren’t forced to read it! Personally I’m very much liking it.
6/12/2022 c55 K
Very much enjoying the story. Do note that ‘slither’ is what snakes etc do. The word you need is ‘sliver’.
Very much enjoying the story. Do note that ‘slither’ is what snakes etc do. The word you need is ‘sliver’.