for HP & The Jade Dragon11/6/2022 c73 KeepUpK
I have just started reading the story so it might seem stupid to read this comment but...
In chapter 73 I don't think Harry should always grovel to Hermione. I get that he loves her and wants her to be happy but she doesn't exactly has 100% rights to be mad at him for being with someone else.
I have just started reading the story so it might seem stupid to read this comment but...
In chapter 73 I don't think Harry should always grovel to Hermione. I get that he loves her and wants her to be happy but she doesn't exactly has 100% rights to be mad at him for being with someone else.
10/11/2022 c95 Jimhh
I really like your fiction but it's moving really slow, I also think that your dragging the relationship between harry and hermoney unnecessarily out to the extreme but I am enjoying the fiction though too many females are infatuated with Harry.
I really like your fiction but it's moving really slow, I also think that your dragging the relationship between harry and hermoney unnecessarily out to the extreme but I am enjoying the fiction though too many females are infatuated with Harry.
6/13/2022 c66 K
Definitely not losing my interest!
Definitely not losing my interest!
6/14/2022 c101 Hedwig68
This has to be one of the best stories if have read on Fanfiction.
Defiantly Going into my favourites.
Keep up the great Work.
This has to be one of the best stories if have read on Fanfiction.
Defiantly Going into my favourites.
Keep up the great Work.
6/12/2022 c58 K
It is a very enjoyable story, and if some people don’t like how it is developing, then they aren’t forced to read it! Personally I’m very much liking it.
It is a very enjoyable story, and if some people don’t like how it is developing, then they aren’t forced to read it! Personally I’m very much liking it.
6/12/2022 c55 K
Very much enjoying the story. Do note that ‘slither’ is what snakes etc do. The word you need is ‘sliver’.
Very much enjoying the story. Do note that ‘slither’ is what snakes etc do. The word you need is ‘sliver’.
6/12/2022 c43 K
Hot stuff!
Hot stuff!
6/11/2022 c22 K
I see that the dreaded apostrophes have struck again in the words ‘German’s’ and ‘Griffindor’s’ where as simple plurals they should never appear. However I am so enjoying this story that I can put them down to typos.
I see that the dreaded apostrophes have struck again in the words ‘German’s’ and ‘Griffindor’s’ where as simple plurals they should never appear. However I am so enjoying this story that I can put them down to typos.
6/10/2022 c90 wolflover1620
just a thought but with Stacy's idea I'm trying to create a faster way of communication based off of the Scrolls for the school wouldn't it be easiest just to do a linked and targeted Gemino charm
just a thought but with Stacy's idea I'm trying to create a faster way of communication based off of the Scrolls for the school wouldn't it be easiest just to do a linked and targeted Gemino charm
6/10/2022 c70 Hedwig68
You hav to have harry and Hester have a bit of a fling Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease. Hahahahahah
You hav to have harry and Hester have a bit of a fling Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease. Hahahahahah
2/3/2022 c1 
11thunderofdeath97
yeah they had his best interests at heart, is that right?
molly sure as hell showed that when she didn't allow harry to spend much time with sirius, or allowed him to be told what tom was planning, when everyone knew harry not only had the right to know, but he would end up being the one to face him again and kill him.
albus sure as fuck showed that when he manipulated a love starved orphan, who he allowed to be abused, physically and verbally and emotionally by his peers and relatives, and sent the said by to his death.
no you're right, they clearly loved the kid and had his best interests at heart, yeah right, lol
11thunderofdeath97yeah they had his best interests at heart, is that right?
molly sure as hell showed that when she didn't allow harry to spend much time with sirius, or allowed him to be told what tom was planning, when everyone knew harry not only had the right to know, but he would end up being the one to face him again and kill him.
albus sure as fuck showed that when he manipulated a love starved orphan, who he allowed to be abused, physically and verbally and emotionally by his peers and relatives, and sent the said by to his death.
no you're right, they clearly loved the kid and had his best interests at heart, yeah right, lol
12/23/2021 c42 allanreimer
Love the story and the scenes you paint with your words. ... apart from the occasional misplaced pronoun. I think Harry might start to hate having human staff though.
Love the story and the scenes you paint with your words. ... apart from the occasional misplaced pronoun. I think Harry might start to hate having human staff though.