for HP & The Jade Dragon3/7/2018 c5 Weird
So far I've glossed through the story,... a lot of it is kind of hard to read. It's like making a statement, then informing the people why you made said statement with another statement. It's too much information for such a little part of the story.
As for the "lordships" you've handed out. They make no sense. Harry is AT LEAST Lord Griffindor and Lord Slytherin. Slytherin by conquest and it was even said in canon that he was of Griffindor's line, hence how he was able to pull out the sword. To make him the lord of Ravenclaw is absolutely madness. If ANYONE, Hermoine should be Ravenclaw, for obvious reasons. Neville should be Hufflepuff for how he sticks by and thrived with friends. Ron shouldn't be there at all.
This is so,... ass backwards,... that it's making the "story" seem that much more,... forced.
So far I've glossed through the story,... a lot of it is kind of hard to read. It's like making a statement, then informing the people why you made said statement with another statement. It's too much information for such a little part of the story.
As for the "lordships" you've handed out. They make no sense. Harry is AT LEAST Lord Griffindor and Lord Slytherin. Slytherin by conquest and it was even said in canon that he was of Griffindor's line, hence how he was able to pull out the sword. To make him the lord of Ravenclaw is absolutely madness. If ANYONE, Hermoine should be Ravenclaw, for obvious reasons. Neville should be Hufflepuff for how he sticks by and thrived with friends. Ron shouldn't be there at all.
This is so,... ass backwards,... that it's making the "story" seem that much more,... forced.
2/27/2018 c101 Guest
Hay "Shu Ouma GC." writing Waiting over and over. are You nuts? I have seen Your site. Lots of other peoples work and none of Your own. Try writing something Yourself instead of being rude to a real author then stealing their work and posting it on Your site.
Hay "Shu Ouma GC." writing Waiting over and over. are You nuts? I have seen Your site. Lots of other peoples work and none of Your own. Try writing something Yourself instead of being rude to a real author then stealing their work and posting it on Your site.
2/25/2018 c75 Guestapo
Ick, this is like the fourth time I've seen someone run over and jump in front of a curse for someone else in HP fanfic. It'd take like a tenth of the time and effort to simply banish them away.
Ick, this is like the fourth time I've seen someone run over and jump in front of a curse for someone else in HP fanfic. It'd take like a tenth of the time and effort to simply banish them away.
2/24/2018 c101 MidoB96
You're killing me with that last cliff hanger, my poor heart can't take much more of this waiting Mr. Craggle and I believe the rest of your readers and I are impatiently waiting for the next chapter, though i do hope you're doing well as I understand that the demands of life often take precedence over writing. That doesn't mean i'm not anxious to continue reading though haha.
You're killing me with that last cliff hanger, my poor heart can't take much more of this waiting Mr. Craggle and I believe the rest of your readers and I are impatiently waiting for the next chapter, though i do hope you're doing well as I understand that the demands of life often take precedence over writing. That doesn't mean i'm not anxious to continue reading though haha.
2/15/2018 c101 Shu Ouma GC
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2/10/2018 c101 Guest
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