for Old Lady6/8/2017 c10 Guest
This is a cute story! There are issues with spelling and grammar for you to work on. But I'll tell you, I can't write this well in my second language (Spanish). Keep it up. Practice makes perfect.
Ks
This is a cute story! There are issues with spelling and grammar for you to work on. But I'll tell you, I can't write this well in my second language (Spanish). Keep it up. Practice makes perfect.
Ks
23/14/2017 c9 reader
Among other issues, it's Tacoma and not Tacoman
Among other issues, it's Tacoma and not Tacoman
9/14/2016 c1 Guest
So hard to follow I would re vamp it.. Make it one set character I could not get through the first chapter it was terrible
So hard to follow I would re vamp it.. Make it one set character I could not get through the first chapter it was terrible
7/18/2016 c3 Guest
soo confusing to follow spelling/ format not brilliant
soo confusing to follow spelling/ format not brilliant