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7/17/2016 c3 1davycrockett100
sweet
7/17/2016 c3 Darksnider05
A jedi who can't reach out and draw on the Force wouldn't really be able to use light saber forms effectively. But also the most famous female dual lightsaber wielder is Satele Shan who you can actually see fight in the Star wars old republic online trailer.

When a Jedi touches the force their like functioning and meditating all at once. It's a very mental thing to do while moving around which is why it's a bit weird Sansa and Arya's behavior didn't change after learning how to meditate and sink into the force which is basically step one of anything force related.
7/17/2016 c3 11Wolvenstrom
Dammit Sansa.
7/17/2016 c3 9Advena Phillips
*Silently waits for next chapter of sword dance over Westeros*
7/16/2016 c2 earendil18
Don't forget about Arya's love of exploration and discovering. In the first book, she was happy during the journée South (before the Joffrey incident) because she saw 36 flower's she had never seen before and because Mycah saw her a lizard-lion.
Yep, Arya likes flowers but more like a botanist or a naturalist likes them than in a ladylike way.
7/15/2016 c2 lex021
great man keep it going
7/15/2016 c2 Guest
Interesting chapter. Minor philosophical quibble personally in your note, considering personally I consider the side with relative power to generally have the moral obligation. In this case, regardless of what happened or how the Prince is at general fault.
7/15/2016 c2 Darksnider05
Yeah your doing it again Arya is a ridiculously focused student on things she wants to learned to the point of being a prodigy. You could of come at this from the angle of Sansa being down trodden on Arya out pacing her and leaving her behind humbling her and causing her to look inward. Instead your adding things to Sansa without actually giving her any time to grow as a person. Sansa at the start of the series was a near sociopath in her lack of care about anyone she considered beneath. Dead bodies of the innocent meant nothing to her and she was as empathatec as a brick. Arya on the other hand felt greatly for everyone as her father taught her to judge people by meeting them and she did. It takes her the death of Mycah to start looking around and noticing her father said those words but didn't practice them. He didn't have the power to do so over Mycah and I doubt Arya would care. But he was aware that Arya saw it for what it was and started talking to her to calm her down from her rage at the injustice of it all, she legit blamed herself and was near muderous at Sansa over Mycah. Sansa gave no shits about the death of Mycah she is the master of delusion and it takes her fathers head getting chopped for her to even start peaking out into reality and seeing everything for what it is.

For once please don't type case these characters without thinking about their journies in the books.
7/15/2016 c1 Darksnider05
You ever figure out how to write these two characters?
7/15/2016 c2 Advena Phillips
Porn Sausages... I wonder what's on your mind...
7/15/2016 c2 22edboy4926
Good chapter.
7/15/2016 c2 1davycrockett100
sweet
7/15/2016 c1 Guest
There is only one color thats suitable for Arya, and its purple. With "Badass motherfucker" on the hilt.
7/15/2016 c2 Guest
Stannis is the only other one who puts the needs of the realm before his own the rest are deluded fools who fight for personal glory and power

His problem is he doesn't understand that almost anyone will believe almost anything, they will believe a lie is the truth because they want it to be true or because they are afraid it might be true

He should stop talking about his rights and start talking about how he is the best man for the job, that he always does his duty unlike the others

Stark forces rape pillage and burn just as much as their Lannister counterparts

Mace Tyrell would strangle a thousand babies to death with his bare hands if it meant putting Tyrell blood on the Iron Throne

The blood of the Riverlands is on Catelyn's hands as much as Gregor Clegane and Tywin Lannister's, her efforts to protect her children only put them in greater danger and all that other death

Balon Greyjoy wants revenge more than gold, he blames the Starks and the North for costing him his crown and his other sons and is too stupid (like most people) to see it was Stannis destroying his fleet that cost him all that

Robb is a great general he wins every battle but loses the war because he completely fails the diplomatic side of things, there is more to being a lord much less a king than winning all your battles he's wise beyond his years in some ways but still young in others to a lesser extent so is Dany Robb is a tactician but not a strategist he has no real plan for winning the war as a whole he seeks no alliances all his forces are his or his grandfather's

And how many innocents will Arya murder for her freedom, someone needs to tell her of the realm’s need for stability, and unless she wants to go beyond the Wall and hunt and kill for her daily bread, she must also do her duties as a Lady of her House as the Mormont women do, work is called work not fun for a reason, in short she doesn’t get it both ways, we need the tedious minutia of governance, someone needs to tell her war is hell something like it's about protecting your home and family and living up to noblesse oblige

Melisandre is trying to ensure the human race survives

I don't think Jaime should be hated for breaking his vows given what Aerys was but because people think he did it to increase his family's position, influence and power remember he was young and stupid and as one of the world's greatest warriors almost never needed to actually use his brain and think like most people (he thought no one would believe him) so it's somewhat understandable he hasn't overcome these shortcomings until he lost his hand and saw his sister for what she is
7/15/2016 c2 birdy
please update as fast as as you can
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