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9/14/2020 c1 S
Enjoyed this short piece. I like a strong, confident Hermione and a Harry who is surrounded by family. That Peter was included was another good thing. Thanks.
8/11/2016 c1 12JustWolfy1
Very good! I loved it!
7/31/2016 c1 arizonadaydreamer
What a lovely little Alternate Reality one-shot!
7/21/2016 c1 5Man of Constant Sorrow
Well written, but Hermione resembles Canon Hermione in name only and as such this feels more like Harry/OC, which ain't my cup of tea. I get that this was a bit of self expression, which I applaud, but you put so much of yourself into her characterization that you edged out the things we love about Hermione that makes her, her.
7/16/2016 c1 anotherboarduser
Interesting
7/15/2016 c1 Guest
I absolutely loved this story. Hermione and Harry were simply awesome, and I love a strong Hermione who isn't ashamed of her brains and her strength. I understand completely what you mean, and feel I shouldn't have to change who I am to date more. Please, consider writing this story as a longer one. I'd really love to see these characters fall in love in a longer story. If not, I love this story anyway, and hope you'll write similar stories in the future.
7/15/2016 c1 10Philosophize
Great story, and I agree completely with your rant!
7/15/2016 c1 Archarc
Great one shot.. Kudos
7/14/2016 c1 6slytherinshadowhunter67
This was very well written, I really liked it :)

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