
8/31/2016 c12
10SallyJAvery
This is just better every time. I love how you've characterised Neville, and the way you just casually build the story is so deft and subtle and brilliant! Also I totally headcanon Draco and Hermione's daughter being called Sagitta - that's her name in my first fic, so happy someone else has chosen it too! "Arrow," just perfection and Tiernan, "Little Lord," I love it!

This is just better every time. I love how you've characterised Neville, and the way you just casually build the story is so deft and subtle and brilliant! Also I totally headcanon Draco and Hermione's daughter being called Sagitta - that's her name in my first fic, so happy someone else has chosen it too! "Arrow," just perfection and Tiernan, "Little Lord," I love it!
8/28/2016 c11 Cecily Mitchell
She's right. Doing what is right and doing what is easy is rarely (read: never) the same thing. I liked that analogy about battered spouses. It seems scarily accurate
She's right. Doing what is right and doing what is easy is rarely (read: never) the same thing. I liked that analogy about battered spouses. It seems scarily accurate
8/26/2016 c11 Beth
Two thumbs up and a shout of hooray for Hermione! Love that I got to read this chapter on Women's Equality Day.
Keep up the masterful work
Two thumbs up and a shout of hooray for Hermione! Love that I got to read this chapter on Women's Equality Day.
Keep up the masterful work
8/26/2016 c11 Guest
I loved the chapter, I hoped for something more with Harry, dean, Nevell I don't know more help or support, worry I don't know, it was a super chapter just the same and I look forward to the next updated chapter when you post it
I loved the chapter, I hoped for something more with Harry, dean, Nevell I don't know more help or support, worry I don't know, it was a super chapter just the same and I look forward to the next updated chapter when you post it
8/25/2016 c11 Guest
! Loved it!
! Loved it!
8/27/2016 c11 Capecodcanal
I just love this Hermione. Figures Molly had something to say about Hermione, just like she did in fourth year. The "less stylish" American cruise ship lapping Great Britain is fantastic, so clever. I can't wait to see what happens next!
I just love this Hermione. Figures Molly had something to say about Hermione, just like she did in fourth year. The "less stylish" American cruise ship lapping Great Britain is fantastic, so clever. I can't wait to see what happens next!
8/27/2016 c11
2silverlovedragoness
[briefcase however] would require a comma in between
[stave off creditors] needs a period at the end of the sentence
[contained within where as sound as] where should be were right?
[are we gong there] gong should be going
Wow, what a chapter! Lines are being drawn on their own for the witches and wizards to follow by and while a bit of the business tactics were confusing to me, overall, basically Hermione is again the reigning champion here. Pity barely anyone sees that. Unfortunate for Ron to be so blindsided and brash, but I'm glad the other three at least gave her consideration for her efforts and motivation. Can't wait to see where it goes!

[briefcase however] would require a comma in between
[stave off creditors] needs a period at the end of the sentence
[contained within where as sound as] where should be were right?
[are we gong there] gong should be going
Wow, what a chapter! Lines are being drawn on their own for the witches and wizards to follow by and while a bit of the business tactics were confusing to me, overall, basically Hermione is again the reigning champion here. Pity barely anyone sees that. Unfortunate for Ron to be so blindsided and brash, but I'm glad the other three at least gave her consideration for her efforts and motivation. Can't wait to see where it goes!
8/26/2016 c11
3Evilmaiden
I wanna see where that last line goes! Hermione has definitely moved earth and sky to be with them, so the bond is indeed intense!

I wanna see where that last line goes! Hermione has definitely moved earth and sky to be with them, so the bond is indeed intense!
8/26/2016 c11
15rebelsaurus29
A cruise ship. A triad. This is my kind of party lol. Great update! :-)

A cruise ship. A triad. This is my kind of party lol. Great update! :-)
8/26/2016 c11
3HarryPGinnyW4eva
I feel really sorry for her after this chapter. She is giving up her life, anyone's respect, and the ability to live a normal life, to save the Wizarding world once again, and no one, including her supposed friends, appreciates it, applauds it, or is helping her. I hope when all is said and done, she gets some of her own back. Thanks, HG4eva

I feel really sorry for her after this chapter. She is giving up her life, anyone's respect, and the ability to live a normal life, to save the Wizarding world once again, and no one, including her supposed friends, appreciates it, applauds it, or is helping her. I hope when all is said and done, she gets some of her own back. Thanks, HG4eva
8/26/2016 c11
8Jasmine Venn
I just wish that the Hermione you describe was real, and that she was my boss. I don't think I've ever read a character before and thought "I like you so much, I want to work for you".

I just wish that the Hermione you describe was real, and that she was my boss. I don't think I've ever read a character before and thought "I like you so much, I want to work for you".