for Family Values5/14/2017 c1 Ariannegarabito
Good.
Good.
7/18/2016 c1 Bia
Gostei mais acho que VC deveria deixa a história mais longo
Gostei mais acho que VC deveria deixa a história mais longo
7/19/2016 c1 KEmperor
I really like the plotline concept here, but English is clearly not your first language so the word choice and grammar are not clear. I can understand what you mean mainly, but I would recommend having someone fluent in the language edit your work.
I really like the plotline concept here, but English is clearly not your first language so the word choice and grammar are not clear. I can understand what you mean mainly, but I would recommend having someone fluent in the language edit your work.
7/19/2016 c1 smoak999
Love your storyline but you really need to proof read this chapter because it has a lot of mistakes and in some parts it doesn't make sense...
Love your storyline but you really need to proof read this chapter because it has a lot of mistakes and in some parts it doesn't make sense...