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I love it XD
I love it XD
12/31/2016 c17 Bella-swan11
Logan knows that Jean's happiness is the most important thing. I'm meeting her with Peter. Then you're happy with her, you know that with Scott there was always the theme of her jealousy.
She seems in love with Peter, they deserve to be happy. Plus it's fun, to imagine that Jean is the only one who can manage to kick Erik's butt. She's just Peter's partner.
I hope you keep writing stories about Peter and Jean.
Logan knows that Jean's happiness is the most important thing. I'm meeting her with Peter. Then you're happy with her, you know that with Scott there was always the theme of her jealousy.
She seems in love with Peter, they deserve to be happy. Plus it's fun, to imagine that Jean is the only one who can manage to kick Erik's butt. She's just Peter's partner.
I hope you keep writing stories about Peter and Jean.
10/21/2016 c17 
11Archel-Always
AHHHHH! I loved this so so much! Sophie and Evan have such great chemistry, which is why I ship Jean and Peter so hard! Amazing writing!
11Archel-AlwaysAHHHHH! I loved this so so much! Sophie and Evan have such great chemistry, which is why I ship Jean and Peter so hard! Amazing writing!
9/3/2016 c17 16AmeliaDarkholme
HELLO SWEETHEART!
I messagged you a lengthy review because I couldn't review at first. But I reviewed again here because we all know how us authors crave reviews ;) Anyway, brilliant work, as always. And thanks for the little credit regarding the age haha :D
Till next time, my dear ;)
16AmeliaDarkholmeHELLO SWEETHEART!
I messagged you a lengthy review because I couldn't review at first. But I reviewed again here because we all know how us authors crave reviews ;) Anyway, brilliant work, as always. And thanks for the little credit regarding the age haha :D
Till next time, my dear ;)
9/2/2016 c17 gracedreamcloud
A perfect ending to a perfect story. I'm sad that it's over but you ended it perfectly! Thank you so much for sharing your fantastic story. Youre an incredible author and I hope you don't stop writing!
A perfect ending to a perfect story. I'm sad that it's over but you ended it perfectly! Thank you so much for sharing your fantastic story. Youre an incredible author and I hope you don't stop writing!
9/2/2016 c17 octoberfangirl
OH MY GOSH! I F***ING LOVE IT! I was about to cry thinking that Peter might've died or something but I didn't skip till the end! I am SO HAPPY! This is F***ING AWESOME!
I hope you'll make some more!
XOXO
OH MY GOSH! I F***ING LOVE IT! I was about to cry thinking that Peter might've died or something but I didn't skip till the end! I am SO HAPPY! This is F***ING AWESOME!
I hope you'll make some more!
XOXO
9/2/2016 c17 59oneiromancer242
Perfect ending! Poor confused Logan :-) I did love this from beginning to end and can't wait for your next story! Thank you for sharing it with us.
59oneiromancer242Perfect ending! Poor confused Logan :-) I did love this from beginning to end and can't wait for your next story! Thank you for sharing it with us.
9/2/2016 c17 Mvea
lol poor logan! I really enjoyed this beautiful story you write. Thank you for this! please write more :3
lol poor logan! I really enjoyed this beautiful story you write. Thank you for this! please write more :3
8/31/2016 c16 gracedreamcloud
Aw, I'm sad it's ending but this whole story is amazing! Especially this chapter. It was written so well and it was amazing!
Aw, I'm sad it's ending but this whole story is amazing! Especially this chapter. It was written so well and it was amazing!
8/31/2016 c16 16AmeliaDarkholme
YOU! I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT RED! HOW! WE'RE NO LONGER FRIENDS! *kicks a table and pouts till next week*
Lol just kidding. I love you Red ;) This chapter was amazing. I totally loved it. God, everything was perfect. But yea, if you do kill him, I'll be SUPER sad. So pleeaasee don't kill my baby.
Also, update soon kay. Will be waiting!
16AmeliaDarkholmeYOU! I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT RED! HOW! WE'RE NO LONGER FRIENDS! *kicks a table and pouts till next week*
Lol just kidding. I love you Red ;) This chapter was amazing. I totally loved it. God, everything was perfect. But yea, if you do kill him, I'll be SUPER sad. So pleeaasee don't kill my baby.
Also, update soon kay. Will be waiting!
8/30/2016 c16 1Truman B
Did Peter just die? Wow, I really felt emotional reading that. Great Job, I loved this story so much!
1Truman BDid Peter just die? Wow, I really felt emotional reading that. Great Job, I loved this story so much!
8/30/2016 c16 octoberfangirl
Oh! What have you done? I'm crying my eyes out! I probably won't be able to get over this until the next chapter.
Emotional wreck aside, this is freakin' AWESOME!
You're so rad! Excellent storytelling!
Xoxo
Oh! What have you done? I'm crying my eyes out! I probably won't be able to get over this until the next chapter.
Emotional wreck aside, this is freakin' AWESOME!
You're so rad! Excellent storytelling!
Xoxo
8/30/2016 c16 59oneiromancer242
Actual tears. You made this tough guy right here shed actual tears, you brilliant author you!
Poor Peter! Poor Jean! Poor everyone!
And now to point out that comets have two tails, one forward pointing and the other back, and that they are not actually made of rock... but of course, how would Peter know a thing like that? ;-) Can't wait for more! xx
59oneiromancer242Actual tears. You made this tough guy right here shed actual tears, you brilliant author you!
Poor Peter! Poor Jean! Poor everyone!
And now to point out that comets have two tails, one forward pointing and the other back, and that they are not actually made of rock... but of course, how would Peter know a thing like that? ;-) Can't wait for more! xx
8/26/2016 c15 Bella-swan11
Scott is better get ready, because Erik will want to kill for leaving her son.
Now you have to explain that it was his decision, he wanted to save to achieve rescue.
After all, there is a possibility kidnapped Peter who is an enemy Magneto.
Scott is better get ready, because Erik will want to kill for leaving her son.
Now you have to explain that it was his decision, he wanted to save to achieve rescue.
After all, there is a possibility kidnapped Peter who is an enemy Magneto.