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9/14 c7 Redhood1983
sweet a new chapter it's good can not wait for more
9/14 c2 Guest
Please for the of Odin, get someone to proofread this.
9/14 c7 15NinjaFang1331
Excellent job and thank you for continuing the story I really miss reading it.
9/14 c7 Dasgun
о.о
9/14 c7 4Gamelover41592
awesome job on this chapter and welcome back :)
5/3/2020 c1 Guest
I dont know why you couldnt of used just a normal human instead of Disgracing narutos name with this story if he doesnt have powers and doesnt hold a bijuu and has not grown up in his universe...serious you shitty authors only use his name then just take away all his abilities like serioudly if your going to make naruto powerless just USE A REGULAR FUCKING HUMAN
12/2/2019 c1 Battlewolf1992
I didn't even know httyd had other books till I looked up the Doomfang and I love the name Blackheart.
8/8/2018 c6 Crusherman5
have you abandoned this
7/18/2018 c6 kingvlad2011
please update soon.
4/16/2018 c6 Guest
Please continue this story.
1/3/2018 c3 Guest
Why was he sitting on her lap in chapter 3 thats really weird you seriously need to get in a relationship if you you think a guy actually sits in a girls lap
12/28/2017 c1 kuroakuma999
Your grammar had me dying inside I'm sorry I truly believe that this could be a great story but, dude your grammar is so bad.
11/30/2017 c1 1monsterkillers124
I been beating myself senseless at how bad the spelling and grammar is. I don't mean to be a dick but seriously needs to be reviewed by a good beta or something needs to be fixed and again I'm sorry but it had to be said Ok good so far but need to do more spell checks and then post new chapters after proof reading and grammar
11/21/2017 c6 Guest
I love this story keep it up
11/20/2017 c6 General zod
Hey this is good, thou it's difficult to read, some word's are spelt incorrect while other words just dont seem to fit what your trying to express. Religion is a complicated thing in this because you have vikings what believe in norse mythology also using Greek mythology such as Posiden the god of the ocean/earthquakes when it should be Thor the god of storms/lightning and any other Norse god. There are some things like the referncing towards certain things what a Era/time zone with vikings shouldnt know about which kinda spoil it for me, like how would they know what Dinasaurs sound/Roar like or what is a ballown is, the ballown is easy to fix because it could just be fish intestines, the last thing what did kinda bother me was the ending of chapter 6 on how you skined the fish and got rid of the poop shoot from the fish, the thing with fish is you actually take all the guts out and Scale the fish not skin it or you could get sick and with naruto being a fishermen he should know these things
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