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1DemonWolf25
Why did i think that was who that demon was...
I really want this continued now
1DemonWolf25Why did i think that was who that demon was...
I really want this continued now
1/17/2019 c21 Carlisa1974
Hi... so is she Sebastians mate now that he's claimed her? Claude is the lower demon and the guy from her past as an assassin so was it Lucifer that he was talking about when he said " he'll find you" "he'll make me find you" back when they fell out?
Hi... so is she Sebastians mate now that he's claimed her? Claude is the lower demon and the guy from her past as an assassin so was it Lucifer that he was talking about when he said " he'll find you" "he'll make me find you" back when they fell out?
6/11/2018 c21 3steph557
I absolutely love this fanfic! I think that you should have more Lucifer scenes since he’s an interesting person and keeps everyone on their toes - even Sebastian. Considering that he’s a higher rank that Sebastian and assuming Claude is of the same rank of lower, things are gonna get a bit messy. So Claude is a former assassin, or at least posed as one during his time serving another contract. But wait if it’s in Amelia’s past, the this is the Claude of the future? Man this time traveling business is a big bowl of wibbly-wobbly timey-wimy stuff.
3steph557I absolutely love this fanfic! I think that you should have more Lucifer scenes since he’s an interesting person and keeps everyone on their toes - even Sebastian. Considering that he’s a higher rank that Sebastian and assuming Claude is of the same rank of lower, things are gonna get a bit messy. So Claude is a former assassin, or at least posed as one during his time serving another contract. But wait if it’s in Amelia’s past, the this is the Claude of the future? Man this time traveling business is a big bowl of wibbly-wobbly timey-wimy stuff.
4/24/2018 c21 Guest
I have a feeling it’s a SebastianxOCxCluade story. Basically both demons share and protect one woman from Lucifer himself. Similar to the other fan fiction story called “Heirlooms.” Though it’s my opinion.
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I have a feeling it’s a SebastianxOCxCluade story. Basically both demons share and protect one woman from Lucifer himself. Similar to the other fan fiction story called “Heirlooms.” Though it’s my opinion.
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4/14/2018 c21 TinyBara
I'm excited to see this story back in business! ;) Also I'd say bring him in if you feel like you have some good ideas for him and of course if you think he plays a big role in your plot. :))
I'm excited to see this story back in business! ;) Also I'd say bring him in if you feel like you have some good ideas for him and of course if you think he plays a big role in your plot. :))
2/23/2018 c21 2Misia0123
yay! another arc ensues! Great work so far. Tbh I did have to go back and reread this fanfic because I completely forgot what it was about. XD. Not to worry though I'm up to date and still loving it! Keep up the hard work, those last couple of chapters were really heated eh? XD By the way, question. Does that intimate act that Amelia and Sebastian carried out in chp. 20 mean she's claimed now? Or does it mean something else when it comes to "surrendering your body". I would love it if you could explain the whole Marking and Claiming process a bit more thoroughly but otherwise you're doing great! Good luck in writing the next chapter, I'll be looking forward to it. Love you, Misia out xxx
2Misia0123yay! another arc ensues! Great work so far. Tbh I did have to go back and reread this fanfic because I completely forgot what it was about. XD. Not to worry though I'm up to date and still loving it! Keep up the hard work, those last couple of chapters were really heated eh? XD By the way, question. Does that intimate act that Amelia and Sebastian carried out in chp. 20 mean she's claimed now? Or does it mean something else when it comes to "surrendering your body". I would love it if you could explain the whole Marking and Claiming process a bit more thoroughly but otherwise you're doing great! Good luck in writing the next chapter, I'll be looking forward to it. Love you, Misia out xxx
2/14/2018 c21 Guest
Love the chapter. More Lucifer for sure. I wanna know what's going on with the whole claiming/marking thing!
Love the chapter. More Lucifer for sure. I wanna know what's going on with the whole claiming/marking thing!
2/14/2018 c21 Mary
I'm so glad you're back! Great chapter, is it safe to assume we'll be seeing an energetic young prince in the next chapter? :). Also I definitely wouldn't mind more Lucifer, he seems like he could bring a lot to the story plotwise with both Sebastian/Stolas and Amelia (I also like the slight rivalry there seems to be), ultimately it's your story though. Either way I hope you keep updating!
I'm so glad you're back! Great chapter, is it safe to assume we'll be seeing an energetic young prince in the next chapter? :). Also I definitely wouldn't mind more Lucifer, he seems like he could bring a lot to the story plotwise with both Sebastian/Stolas and Amelia (I also like the slight rivalry there seems to be), ultimately it's your story though. Either way I hope you keep updating!
2/15/2018 c21 AUniqueIndifference
Yay! An update! Thank you for continuing this story! It's getting hard to find good ones that I can really get into, so I'm glad to that you haven't given up on it yet. -
Yay! An update! Thank you for continuing this story! It's getting hard to find good ones that I can really get into, so I'm glad to that you haven't given up on it yet. -