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8/4/2016 c1 3ObsessedwithEyeballs
This is super good, although I haven't read the book or whatever it was that it was based on, I love the gothic mystery elements. Keep up the good work!
7/22/2016 c1 DutchessBatCat
I really like the concept of this story. You do very well in writing interactions between characters and dialogue. However, you could use some work on your descriptions of location and I would recommend finding a beta reader/proofreader to go through and help with the grammar and a few funky sentences in there.
7/21/2016 c1 DeathAngel221
The story was fantastic, I was just looking for a good story and here you are just 2 hours ago. You should update soon. can't wait.

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