for Past Beginnings2/15/2019 c1 Lily
Aaaaw I love this
Aaaaw I love this
1/24/2017 c1 Mystic-Myth
that was great I love how you let Naruto explain the future, but not reveal to much
that was great I love how you let Naruto explain the future, but not reveal to much
9/2/2016 c1 
2Kayano.takama
omygod! I love your story so much!
I hope there’s romance between sasuke and naruto. I like the pairing.
Please continue.. i love your story!
2Kayano.takamaomygod! I love your story so much!
I hope there’s romance between sasuke and naruto. I like the pairing.
Please continue.. i love your story!
8/6/2016 c1 Arw165
I don't exactly agree with the long guest-comment about secrecy. I don't think telling everybody everything will make fixing future easy. Prescience is a double-edged sword. It can help you prevent some events, but the more we change, the more future changes, which is gonna render our foreknowledge useless. And some other unpleasant events might occur. So I would opt for being careful about blabbering too much, but I guess it's already too late. Seems like Naruto decided to keep secret things, which would make present crowd very uncomfortable. Like saying, it was Itachi who murdered everyone, because Sasuke's parents decided to prepare cout d'etat. If I was in Sasuke's shoes, I would probably resent them a little bit for that.
To be honest, I wasn't a fan of telling parents Naruto and Sasuke are their children, not to make to much mess. I don't know how you are going to solve the problem of their future selves being born. How would Sasuke and Naruto not being born this time change our main characters' situation?
I'm waiting for answers in next chapters.
I don't exactly agree with the long guest-comment about secrecy. I don't think telling everybody everything will make fixing future easy. Prescience is a double-edged sword. It can help you prevent some events, but the more we change, the more future changes, which is gonna render our foreknowledge useless. And some other unpleasant events might occur. So I would opt for being careful about blabbering too much, but I guess it's already too late. Seems like Naruto decided to keep secret things, which would make present crowd very uncomfortable. Like saying, it was Itachi who murdered everyone, because Sasuke's parents decided to prepare cout d'etat. If I was in Sasuke's shoes, I would probably resent them a little bit for that.
To be honest, I wasn't a fan of telling parents Naruto and Sasuke are their children, not to make to much mess. I don't know how you are going to solve the problem of their future selves being born. How would Sasuke and Naruto not being born this time change our main characters' situation?
I'm waiting for answers in next chapters.
7/29/2016 c1 Guest
Update please
Update please
7/27/2016 c1 darkhuntressxir
great story and definitely looking forward for more!
very detail story and easily understands story flow..
great story and definitely looking forward for more!
very detail story and easily understands story flow..
7/24/2016 c1 Guest
I think this is a really good plot for a fanfic. When people do time travel fics, they always make the MCs go back into their kids bodies, which I don't like because it's just a lazy way to retell the whole series. It doesn't bring anything new to the table. So I really like that you've gone back in time to a point before they were born!
I'm sort of torn on my reaction to Naruto, Sarutobi, and the parents. I don't like all the secrecy in time travel fics either. It seems like the main characters are just making things harder on themselves by not telling anyone who they are and what they know. At the same time, it feels like Naruto told all them too much. What if they change the future to the point where Naruto and Sasuke are never born?
I'll given an example. Let's say Minato and Kushina get married much sooner than they otherwise would have now that they know they're going to end up together and have Naruto. If that happens, their first child might not be Naruto because it's a different egg and sperm that gets fertilized. Or they do have Naruto, but this time he's a few years older than Sasuke because he was born too soon. Naruto being older screws everything up because he and Sasuke don't have class together at the academy, don't get put on the same ninja team, and don't become best friends.
There's another issue with Naruto telling the adults everything, and it's that he's now made things too easy on himself. The Hokage and the future Hokage are now on his side. They can easily stop all the bad things from happening. They'll know better now than to mistrust the Uchihas, so the massacre won't happen. They can also go find Obito, and in this timeline Madara is still an old man and hasn't resurrected himself yet, so they can easily defeat him with Naruto and Sasuke's powers. Bam! All the problems easily solved. I think this is why other time travel fics have the characters be secretive, because they are trying to come up with a challenge for the MCs.
So this means that for your fic, the challenge won't be the MCs being stupid and acting secret, it will be that things don't go as planned when they try to change the future. Finding Obito won't be as easy as they thought. Getting people to change their minds about the Uchiha when there's already been years and years of prejudice against them won't be easy either. Do you know what I'm saying? Otherwise there's no plot if all the problems are quickly and easily solved.
I think this is a really good plot for a fanfic. When people do time travel fics, they always make the MCs go back into their kids bodies, which I don't like because it's just a lazy way to retell the whole series. It doesn't bring anything new to the table. So I really like that you've gone back in time to a point before they were born!
I'm sort of torn on my reaction to Naruto, Sarutobi, and the parents. I don't like all the secrecy in time travel fics either. It seems like the main characters are just making things harder on themselves by not telling anyone who they are and what they know. At the same time, it feels like Naruto told all them too much. What if they change the future to the point where Naruto and Sasuke are never born?
I'll given an example. Let's say Minato and Kushina get married much sooner than they otherwise would have now that they know they're going to end up together and have Naruto. If that happens, their first child might not be Naruto because it's a different egg and sperm that gets fertilized. Or they do have Naruto, but this time he's a few years older than Sasuke because he was born too soon. Naruto being older screws everything up because he and Sasuke don't have class together at the academy, don't get put on the same ninja team, and don't become best friends.
There's another issue with Naruto telling the adults everything, and it's that he's now made things too easy on himself. The Hokage and the future Hokage are now on his side. They can easily stop all the bad things from happening. They'll know better now than to mistrust the Uchihas, so the massacre won't happen. They can also go find Obito, and in this timeline Madara is still an old man and hasn't resurrected himself yet, so they can easily defeat him with Naruto and Sasuke's powers. Bam! All the problems easily solved. I think this is why other time travel fics have the characters be secretive, because they are trying to come up with a challenge for the MCs.
So this means that for your fic, the challenge won't be the MCs being stupid and acting secret, it will be that things don't go as planned when they try to change the future. Finding Obito won't be as easy as they thought. Getting people to change their minds about the Uchiha when there's already been years and years of prejudice against them won't be easy either. Do you know what I'm saying? Otherwise there's no plot if all the problems are quickly and easily solved.
7/22/2016 c1 Tee
I realky enjoyed this, and I'm glad Naruto just let everything out except a few things, which I understand why. I didn't understand the secrecy in time travel fics, people can use elements, seals, ninjutsu and all these things but time travel would be unbelievable, I don't get that. I'm glad it's not that way in this and you did it nicely, I've read some that were to unrealistic in the way they delivered the news of them being from the future.
Update soon!
I realky enjoyed this, and I'm glad Naruto just let everything out except a few things, which I understand why. I didn't understand the secrecy in time travel fics, people can use elements, seals, ninjutsu and all these things but time travel would be unbelievable, I don't get that. I'm glad it's not that way in this and you did it nicely, I've read some that were to unrealistic in the way they delivered the news of them being from the future.
Update soon!
7/22/2016 c1 1NaruLoveAnime
Interesting!~ I enjoy and love this first chapter from you.. Bessssst!~ Please update soon.. I can't wait to read next chapter from you!~ _
1NaruLoveAnimeInteresting!~ I enjoy and love this first chapter from you.. Bessssst!~ Please update soon.. I can't wait to read next chapter from you!~ _
7/22/2016 c1 10Boys-Love-Yaoi
Hi !
It's strange, you know, because all along this chapter, I was like "He speaks too much, shut the hell up !" I mean, how is he suppose to chznge 'the future' if he tells so much about it ? But you know what you're doing, so... So I want to know what's next !
I think, like most people, I want to see the Sasuke-Itachi meeting. I mean... Tachi's two years old !
hiyana
10Boys-Love-YaoiHi !
It's strange, you know, because all along this chapter, I was like "He speaks too much, shut the hell up !" I mean, how is he suppose to chznge 'the future' if he tells so much about it ? But you know what you're doing, so... So I want to know what's next !
I think, like most people, I want to see the Sasuke-Itachi meeting. I mean... Tachi's two years old !
hiyana