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2/27/2017 c1 7Icy Kyurem
Interesting. I am curious to how Chris is going to do with the animatronic gang. I wonder what will happen when he meets Springtrap?

Anyways, there are a lot of spelling mistakes, but if you want, you could ask someone to proofread for you. Other than that, I think you kind of need to flesh things out a bit more. Like maybe give us some insight about what Chris is thinking.

I think this story will be great! You are a fantastic writer and I hope to see more works from you! :)

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