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5/18/2020 c11 Elizabeth loines
Please update
8/24/2019 c11 Naniu2002
Updateeee pleaseeee
8/24/2019 c9 Naniu2002
Mmmm, you could dye all hers cloths in Black and Blood red
8/1/2018 c2 Jose19
I am surprised that the Yuki-onna is going to let him so easily after she loves him a great deal, and also about his friends as well.
8/1/2018 c1 Jose19
This will be interesting but I will say Rikuo might be over his head because these so called Humans have powers that can kill Rikuo and even his friends.
6/16/2018 c11 Soccerlover17
Update please!
5/25/2018 c11 2anielsen33326
been over a year and its fun. You gonna continue with this or what?
4/15/2018 c11 just yuki
Tamazuki as in reformed villain, villain hidden in plain sight or before shikoku arc?
4/15/2018 c8 just yuki
I just wanted to say that if I am in the professors position, I would probably think that Rikuo and the Dementor show are rigged. Hell, I am somehow want to say this is rigged right now, and I have reading it from Rikuo's thought and from his POV...
4/15/2018 c5 just yuki
Cussing Dumbledore, how... Bizarro...
4/15/2018 c4 just yuki
Okay, I am confused with Dumbledore doesn't immediately supicious about Rikuo changing form. Or to be more specific, he is not supicious enough. When Yoru changing to Rikuo he is immediately appeased with that proof and not thinking like "oh wait, maybe he is metamorphmagus?" And asking more questions that only original Rikuo know.
The second is the yokai seems to relaxed to me for sleeping in foreign place where they don't know all the occupants. Did they sleep lightly or did they just sleeping and still aware of everyone within some radius? For a bodyguard, Kurotabou looks to relaxed to me, or maybe they are confident in their skill...
4/15/2018 c3 just yuki
Totally sorry and not sorry at the same time for all the questions, but how they can speak and comprehended English fluently (from what I gather in the interaction in this chapter, no struggling, no suttering)?
4/15/2018 c2 just yuki
It's okay, but I am a bit confused with some of the things. First, why Rikuo just have Kurotabou with him? I mean, they will completely going to uncharted territory, far far away from their country, and their only source information is an old man that they never meet or known his reputation before. At least five bodyguard is respectable number, 2 four scouting information and their surroundings and two for shadowing Rikuo and Kuro. Rikuo is strong, but not unkillable. Why he is not supicious that Dumbledore can be lying or preparing trap? Where the precautions?
4/14/2018 c1 just yuki
The first scene seems good, have nice pace and all, but then towards the end it seemed... rushed? And then where his bodyguard, Tsurara, Aotobe and the other? They are afterall protective with their master...
Anyway, it's good start and overall nice chapter for the first in the fic
3/15/2018 c11 VOADOROGyabi
ITS AWESOME PLEASE UPDATE THIS
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