for Friend or Foe9/2/2018 c6 Tony26140
hello i am a french fan of harry potter and i have seen some french translation mistakes and some added words as for example when reading the will of the potter the word godfather is used in french for alice longbottom and in english. It is well and truly registered godmother
hello i am a french fan of harry potter and i have seen some french translation mistakes and some added words as for example when reading the will of the potter the word godfather is used in french for alice longbottom and in english. It is well and truly registered godmother
8/27/2018 c34 howes77
Nooooo don't leave it there. I had to continue reading it all the way, it was to good to stop. What a brilliant writer and imagination you have. Can't wait for more chapters and updates.
Nooooo don't leave it there. I had to continue reading it all the way, it was to good to stop. What a brilliant writer and imagination you have. Can't wait for more chapters and updates.
7/23/2018 c20 Lucy Maud Montgomery
To all those who proclaimed this story to be "brilliant", "amazing", and "incredible"; you're all liars and enablers. This is trash. So much so that it caused such intense dislike in my heart that loud and obnoxious vocal exclamations of exasperation and disappointment escaped my mouth in public. It is very disheartening that anyone thinks this is good, it is an insult. Because to read this story, one would've had to have read or watched Harry Potter. So to have read or watched HP, which is an incredible story both in writing and plot, then hop on and say the same for "friend or foe", is an insult to the highest degree.
Notwithstanding the grammatical and syntaxes errors, the plot and chararcters are caricatured to the extreme. Its distasteful. The relationships between H/HG and NM/EG are abusive and unrepresentative of the mindset of someone of their age or circumstance.
Dumbledore's menace, malevolence, and animosity does NOT make ANY sense whatsoever. If he is a manipulater then he hides in the shadows and delegates to his minions or admirers whilst protecting his overall image. Yet he neither delegates menacingly nor protects his grandfatherly hero-esque façade. Instead, your Albus Dumbledore is as subtle as a crowd of racists in Walmart. He completely, gratuitously ruins something he must have cultivated and planned for decades. Without any reason or rhyme, he attemps to BLOW UP Harry and Hermione without first making sure they were in the predetermined location or that his illegal activities weren't witnessed.
NEXT
Emma Granger finds out the is pregnant, her husband is dead, and she's raped in the SAME day. Her daughter and only child from a very loving and long marriage is hunted by the same men who murdered her husband and raped her. The house she called a home, all of her most valuable sentimental and materialistic possessions have been destroyed. Emma's daughter and ONLY child is married to a teenage billionaire from an abusive home. The man she proclaims to have loved for years who was not only her partner in marriage but in business has very abruptly been ripped from her life. Without a body to mourn or funeral to attend. YET. In less than a months time she is in another relationship. With a women whose husband raped her and plans to do the same to her young daughter. Hmmm a very suspicious and disgusting situation.
And I completely forgot about the magic she mysteriously posseses. Magic that comes with great responsibility and a whole new outlook on life. Magic she has to learn to control.
Yet fuck all that because...SOULMATES. BOOSHAKAYA!
I'm not even going to rip into Harry and Hermione's DISASTROUS 'romance". Cough cough.
I really really tried to like this story but it progressively became worse as the chapters moved along. Somewhere between, "My Immortal" and very trashy dinosaur smut romance.
To all those who proclaimed this story to be "brilliant", "amazing", and "incredible"; you're all liars and enablers. This is trash. So much so that it caused such intense dislike in my heart that loud and obnoxious vocal exclamations of exasperation and disappointment escaped my mouth in public. It is very disheartening that anyone thinks this is good, it is an insult. Because to read this story, one would've had to have read or watched Harry Potter. So to have read or watched HP, which is an incredible story both in writing and plot, then hop on and say the same for "friend or foe", is an insult to the highest degree.
Notwithstanding the grammatical and syntaxes errors, the plot and chararcters are caricatured to the extreme. Its distasteful. The relationships between H/HG and NM/EG are abusive and unrepresentative of the mindset of someone of their age or circumstance.
Dumbledore's menace, malevolence, and animosity does NOT make ANY sense whatsoever. If he is a manipulater then he hides in the shadows and delegates to his minions or admirers whilst protecting his overall image. Yet he neither delegates menacingly nor protects his grandfatherly hero-esque façade. Instead, your Albus Dumbledore is as subtle as a crowd of racists in Walmart. He completely, gratuitously ruins something he must have cultivated and planned for decades. Without any reason or rhyme, he attemps to BLOW UP Harry and Hermione without first making sure they were in the predetermined location or that his illegal activities weren't witnessed.
NEXT
Emma Granger finds out the is pregnant, her husband is dead, and she's raped in the SAME day. Her daughter and only child from a very loving and long marriage is hunted by the same men who murdered her husband and raped her. The house she called a home, all of her most valuable sentimental and materialistic possessions have been destroyed. Emma's daughter and ONLY child is married to a teenage billionaire from an abusive home. The man she proclaims to have loved for years who was not only her partner in marriage but in business has very abruptly been ripped from her life. Without a body to mourn or funeral to attend. YET. In less than a months time she is in another relationship. With a women whose husband raped her and plans to do the same to her young daughter. Hmmm a very suspicious and disgusting situation.
And I completely forgot about the magic she mysteriously posseses. Magic that comes with great responsibility and a whole new outlook on life. Magic she has to learn to control.
Yet fuck all that because...SOULMATES. BOOSHAKAYA!
I'm not even going to rip into Harry and Hermione's DISASTROUS 'romance". Cough cough.
I really really tried to like this story but it progressively became worse as the chapters moved along. Somewhere between, "My Immortal" and very trashy dinosaur smut romance.
7/20/2018 c15 slstanekt
I found it hard to believe that when hermione was hit with the first cruciatus that harry would watch her being tortured for 30 second and not do anything that is retarded.
I found it hard to believe that when hermione was hit with the first cruciatus that harry would watch her being tortured for 30 second and not do anything that is retarded.
7/11/2018 c5 Guest
Good
Good
7/11/2018 c1 matthieumeewis
Ok, i'll try to keep it short, but i don't know if i'm able to.
First of all, What an amazing story!
It's a pleasure to read, and time flies by when i'm doing so
If it was a real book, i would have bought it (but only if the minor grammatical errors are resolved
Second, it's a pity the story is on hiatus, but i would love to see how it ends.(i'm not at the end yet, but i'm really getting into the story now.(it's one you want to keep reading)
Third, I wish there were many more stories like this one.(yes there are quite a few, but you can never have enough harmony)
And at last, if those minor errors in the grammatica are resolved, I would nominate this for a Pulitzer in the fiction category.
Keep it up!
Ok, i'll try to keep it short, but i don't know if i'm able to.
First of all, What an amazing story!
It's a pleasure to read, and time flies by when i'm doing so
If it was a real book, i would have bought it (but only if the minor grammatical errors are resolved
Second, it's a pity the story is on hiatus, but i would love to see how it ends.(i'm not at the end yet, but i'm really getting into the story now.(it's one you want to keep reading)
Third, I wish there were many more stories like this one.(yes there are quite a few, but you can never have enough harmony)
And at last, if those minor errors in the grammatica are resolved, I would nominate this for a Pulitzer in the fiction category.
Keep it up!
7/1/2018 c24 C
Fix your spelling and grammar up so it makes sense
Fix your spelling and grammar up so it makes sense
6/30/2018 c4 
5Ethan76
I'm trying to keep an open mind. Honestly. And I have a feeling it will get better in the later chapters. But this reads like a someone's drunken teenage dream. First, seriously? Lily Potter talking to Harry while unconscious?! Secondly, wouldn't it, again, make more sense to ease into it. Like, for example... Poppy does a medical check of Harry and realizes he has all kinds off issues medically, and they aren't all recent. She wonders why and realizes something is wrong, like her memories are fuzzy (It leads to them realizing Dumbledore is obliviating them, this is the first time an exam has been done by them outside of the school.) Grrrr this needs heavy revising! Amelia is the same way for reactions being so... Poor.
5Ethan76I'm trying to keep an open mind. Honestly. And I have a feeling it will get better in the later chapters. But this reads like a someone's drunken teenage dream. First, seriously? Lily Potter talking to Harry while unconscious?! Secondly, wouldn't it, again, make more sense to ease into it. Like, for example... Poppy does a medical check of Harry and realizes he has all kinds off issues medically, and they aren't all recent. She wonders why and realizes something is wrong, like her memories are fuzzy (It leads to them realizing Dumbledore is obliviating them, this is the first time an exam has been done by them outside of the school.) Grrrr this needs heavy revising! Amelia is the same way for reactions being so... Poor.
6/30/2018 c3 Ethan76
I think instantly switching to pet names is too fast, he just found out he liked her under ten minutes ago. You would have to ease in to it for it to sound natural. Also, Remus brings them home and just knows they need to be touching? I think it would sound more realistic if they just happened to touch and their bodies reacted, pulling each other closer put not waking. Lastly I think it would be better to say in Hermione's letter that Dumbeldore is going past his remit as headmaster saying you can't leave. There are no death eaters hanging about except maybe pettigrew but he was on the run and next to Harry for three years without attacking. Therefore he is acting strange and Hermione thinks it's odd.
I think instantly switching to pet names is too fast, he just found out he liked her under ten minutes ago. You would have to ease in to it for it to sound natural. Also, Remus brings them home and just knows they need to be touching? I think it would sound more realistic if they just happened to touch and their bodies reacted, pulling each other closer put not waking. Lastly I think it would be better to say in Hermione's letter that Dumbeldore is going past his remit as headmaster saying you can't leave. There are no death eaters hanging about except maybe pettigrew but he was on the run and next to Harry for three years without attacking. Therefore he is acting strange and Hermione thinks it's odd.
6/25/2018 c34 dalyscott5
Loving this story so far, can't wait for the next chapter, make sure you get that vacation though.
Loving this story so far, can't wait for the next chapter, make sure you get that vacation though.