for Friend or Foe5/29/2018 c34 
34Neale
This is a delightfully twisted morass of intrigue, thank you kindly.
I do so love stories that take the beaters' bat to the same characters mine do, and treats the ones I like kindly. ;)
Looking forward to seeing where it goes, thanks.
34NealeThis is a delightfully twisted morass of intrigue, thank you kindly.
I do so love stories that take the beaters' bat to the same characters mine do, and treats the ones I like kindly. ;)
Looking forward to seeing where it goes, thanks.
5/22/2018 c34 Beyondthesea16
nice present, yeah hermione needs to take it easy, hope that you won't kill arthur and that someone maybe the twins, bill charlie or even percy will notice, waiting for more
nice present, yeah hermione needs to take it easy, hope that you won't kill arthur and that someone maybe the twins, bill charlie or even percy will notice, waiting for more
5/17/2018 c1 Linkin-Phoenix
Harry I don’t think it’s proper for you to offer to show your portfolio to another woman while standing in front of your wife.
Harry I don’t think it’s proper for you to offer to show your portfolio to another woman while standing in front of your wife.
5/17/2018 c25 Linkin-Phoenix
Harry I don’t think it’s proper for you to offer to show your portfolio to another woman while standing in front of your wife.
Harry I don’t think it’s proper for you to offer to show your portfolio to another woman while standing in front of your wife.
5/4/2018 c1 Radmar
"I am going to let my Godson stay in this dreadfully place"
Dreadful. It's just dreadful that this mistake got through two edits, but whatever. I hope these mistakes don't continue.
"I am going to let my Godson stay in this dreadfully place"
Dreadful. It's just dreadful that this mistake got through two edits, but whatever. I hope these mistakes don't continue.
4/27/2018 c34 mrharrmione
Thank you for a wonderful story. I do hope you continue to write more. A little hint about writer's blocks: the trick is to keep writing the little things that need to happen. When you have trouble getting from A to J, you need to go from A to B, and B to C, etc. You'll find that the rest of the steps seem to fall into place. Thanks again for a great story!
Thank you for a wonderful story. I do hope you continue to write more. A little hint about writer's blocks: the trick is to keep writing the little things that need to happen. When you have trouble getting from A to J, you need to go from A to B, and B to C, etc. You'll find that the rest of the steps seem to fall into place. Thanks again for a great story!
4/23/2018 c1 Guest
Nice
Nice
4/23/2018 c5 Guest
Good
Good
4/21/2018 c7 Guest
What about the other rings? Why does Hermione get them? The other rings from Harry? Why just the Potter one ?
What about the other rings? Why does Hermione get them? The other rings from Harry? Why just the Potter one ?
4/21/2018 c6 Guest
What about Merlin ? Why does he not get a ring for that one ? Or does he get something later?
What about Merlin ? Why does he not get a ring for that one ? Or does he get something later?
4/21/2018 c1 Guest
At the start of the story you have Hedwig out hunting and not back yet ... At the end of the story Hedwig is there and needing exercise... Please fix this ... You had not even have her getting back for it to sort of work... Can't wait to read more ...
At the start of the story you have Hedwig out hunting and not back yet ... At the end of the story Hedwig is there and needing exercise... Please fix this ... You had not even have her getting back for it to sort of work... Can't wait to read more ...
4/16/2018 c31 RWIW
Kudos for serious realism. Emma sounded exactly like the moralizing of people who have never been through unbearable suffering, and Hermione reacted more kindly to it than she could have. Having been on both sides of that at various times, it was somewhat cathartic to read. :(
Hope life improves for you.
Kudos for serious realism. Emma sounded exactly like the moralizing of people who have never been through unbearable suffering, and Hermione reacted more kindly to it than she could have. Having been on both sides of that at various times, it was somewhat cathartic to read. :(
Hope life improves for you.