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3/28/2018 c18 featherdusterpixie
still think harry needs to give hermione some slack.
she's in freaking pain!
3/28/2018 c16 featherdusterpixie
i think they made too big a deal out of hermione's outburst.
her father was just murdered, her mother kidnapped and raped
and then she herself was just under a torture spell.
cut a girl some slack!
3/27/2018 c34 VioletBuckbeak
Oh No! Poor Arthur! He has been put thru so much! Dude probably wishing he had stuck with his plug collection I'm In his shed.

Thanks for chapter! It's great as always!
3/27/2018 c34 Wizards N Dragons Realm
I hate cliffhangers! Grrr! lol Same old Albus up to no good. I hope poor Mr. Weasley isn't damaged to much by Albus.
3/26/2018 c34 TheSphynx
First time reader and reviewer, loving the story, loving every word of it.

Every story I’ve read with Dumbledore as the bad guy has been incredible and your is incredible.

Can’t wait to read more.
3/26/2018 c34 storybook thumb
I had forgotten why I haven't read this in a while then read the first sentence of the chapter. Hermione and Susan going over the buget of Hogwarts? I'm like WTF
3/26/2018 c34 2Otaku of Anime
AW SNAP! The ending of this chapter was interesting. I can only wonder as to what will happen next. Keep up the great work and best of luck in all your writing endeavors
3/26/2018 c34 44dennisud
Too bad Albus can't be beamed off-planet to a barely habitable part of Mars by a Section 31 Time traveler! ;-)
Now to the real review;
Good pacing got everyone together to start figuring out a plan all the while scandalous beetle is witness to the true Dumbledore and his machinations and IMHO that alone will topple his house of cards sooner rather than later.
Let's keep this one going when your muse allows!

dennisud
3/26/2018 c34 3Karatekid-Ninja
Brilliant update. I love that you are still updating with whatever you have! I hope you don’t kill Arthur! Brilliant chapter. Even irregular updates are better then nothing at all
3/26/2018 c34 ej-83
oohhh..i hope that arthur could throw it off soon..and immediately divorce, disown and banish molly from the weasley family..n get himself and the kids not involved with molly and dumbledore's meddling out of the burrow and go somewhere else..anyway keep up the good work
3/26/2018 c34 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
3/26/2018 c34 4Bentears
please tell me you are going to grind Albus and Lucius into the ground and hang Molly out to dry. It seems that the good guys aren't able to catch a break. Looking forward to see where you are going with the story
3/25/2018 c34 Cateagle
A very interesting tidbit you leave us with. I'm certain there's going to be lots more to come as matters look to be quite involved and not playing to Dumbledore's satisfaction at all. I do hope that Arthur manages to avoid or shield from the oblivation Dumbledore is sure to attempt;

You do have my sympathy as I have worked insane hours in the past (five years of 40-hour work weeks) and they do get to you. I hope you get some free time to write and otherwise decompress.
3/25/2018 c34 3Mmars69
OH! I hate you... oh alright, I really don't. Please don't kill one of the good Weasleys. I always did like Arthur. I don't know what you have planned and I'll be waiting with bated breath, what ever that means.
Great story! Thanks for writing.
3/25/2018 c34 Cassandra30
Excellent! I am not sure Molly could or would allow Arthur to be killed. Her complicity is killing her husband could cause her to lose her magic I would think.
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