
1/18 c35 TuxedoMac
Okay so I came across your story and it intrigued me so I started to read it. No I won't lie at times some of the later chapters around like 25 to 29 seem to be more of a slug reading to get through but I think that was more on my part than anything else and with so much to read at one time. As for the story itself I like it because there are aspects that are similar to other stuff I've read and there are ones that are different. I think you're doing a really wonderful job with it and you're making it some that's not just a copy of 15 other stories You're making it your own work and that has a good and a bad to it being that good you know it's some new it's some completely different it gives us some to where we don't know exactly what's coming, and then there is the bad of what can happen like this if you hidden writer's block. I hope your editing and writer's block are done and gone soon because I really liked the story and I want to see where it goes. Now do I think it'll be a too long of a story no timeline-wise I think it'll probably end after the tournament unless this story ends at a when they go off to the school and there's second story picking up for the school year.
I think that's mostly what I've got to say and I know what it can be like when life punches you in the gut throws you down the stairs so that you land on the broken glass and nails that it has already set up at the bottom of the stairs. All I got to say to that is know that you have others that can help you through those times and if the trolls and the karens and the bullies start saying some just go bye Felicia Guess you don't have to read this. And don't let them control you and get to you cuz that's what they want and I hope things go better for you you have a good time .
TuxedoMac
Okay so I came across your story and it intrigued me so I started to read it. No I won't lie at times some of the later chapters around like 25 to 29 seem to be more of a slug reading to get through but I think that was more on my part than anything else and with so much to read at one time. As for the story itself I like it because there are aspects that are similar to other stuff I've read and there are ones that are different. I think you're doing a really wonderful job with it and you're making it some that's not just a copy of 15 other stories You're making it your own work and that has a good and a bad to it being that good you know it's some new it's some completely different it gives us some to where we don't know exactly what's coming, and then there is the bad of what can happen like this if you hidden writer's block. I hope your editing and writer's block are done and gone soon because I really liked the story and I want to see where it goes. Now do I think it'll be a too long of a story no timeline-wise I think it'll probably end after the tournament unless this story ends at a when they go off to the school and there's second story picking up for the school year.
I think that's mostly what I've got to say and I know what it can be like when life punches you in the gut throws you down the stairs so that you land on the broken glass and nails that it has already set up at the bottom of the stairs. All I got to say to that is know that you have others that can help you through those times and if the trolls and the karens and the bullies start saying some just go bye Felicia Guess you don't have to read this. And don't let them control you and get to you cuz that's what they want and I hope things go better for you you have a good time .
TuxedoMac
1/10 c35 Keith
Just wondering if this is the end. Hate to see it end like this, but totally understand if you didn't finish.
Just wondering if this is the end. Hate to see it end like this, but totally understand if you didn't finish.
1/11 c35 Doctor Lumos
As I just commented on the last chapter, thank you for what you have created. If it is your wish, and if you are able, I hope you are able to finish what you started. If not, we will just have to imagine it for ourselves. either way, what you have done is of value and you should be proud of it. I hope the stuggles in your personal life ease. All the best.
As I just commented on the last chapter, thank you for what you have created. If it is your wish, and if you are able, I hope you are able to finish what you started. If not, we will just have to imagine it for ourselves. either way, what you have done is of value and you should be proud of it. I hope the stuggles in your personal life ease. All the best.
12/30/2024 c35 waya715
You tell them! It's your story, you write it as it comes to you, the hell with what folks tell you it should say!
Keep on keeping on!
You tell them! It's your story, you write it as it comes to you, the hell with what folks tell you it should say!
Keep on keeping on!
12/26/2024 c35
1LadySaphire
I LOVE this story and those who spew the hate are pathetic. This is a SAFE place for those who have the desire nay passion of writing can post. I am so sorry that cowards have caused u to doubt ur talents...DO NOT LET THEM WIN. Also...as Oliver Twist begged...More please

I LOVE this story and those who spew the hate are pathetic. This is a SAFE place for those who have the desire nay passion of writing can post. I am so sorry that cowards have caused u to doubt ur talents...DO NOT LET THEM WIN. Also...as Oliver Twist begged...More please
12/18/2024 c35
9DarkenedRose24
Please take all the time you need. It is a wonderful story and worth waiting for. Praying for you and your family.

Please take all the time you need. It is a wonderful story and worth waiting for. Praying for you and your family.
12/11/2024 c35 Clive54
Just read your A.N. I've been in a very similar place to you. My wife became disabled 13 years ago and has been in and out of hospital many times. Despite enormous pressure, I refused to sign a do not resuscitate order,. It seemed to be a never ended cycle of fear and uncertainty with the occasional glimmer of hope that was just enough to keep us both going. Finally we are now getting some real improvement and looking forward to having a better life. So you are not alone.
As for the bullies and trolls just think of them in their own little world so desperate for attention that they descend into hate so they can pretend to be better than what they are, which is nothing.
Best wishes for you and your family and keep on writing and posting your work. Don't let those nameless pathetic excuses of human beings win.
Just read your A.N. I've been in a very similar place to you. My wife became disabled 13 years ago and has been in and out of hospital many times. Despite enormous pressure, I refused to sign a do not resuscitate order,. It seemed to be a never ended cycle of fear and uncertainty with the occasional glimmer of hope that was just enough to keep us both going. Finally we are now getting some real improvement and looking forward to having a better life. So you are not alone.
As for the bullies and trolls just think of them in their own little world so desperate for attention that they descend into hate so they can pretend to be better than what they are, which is nothing.
Best wishes for you and your family and keep on writing and posting your work. Don't let those nameless pathetic excuses of human beings win.
12/7/2024 c35 aront60
I’m sorry to hear youve been getting abuse and it sounds like you’ve been going through some really tough times. My advice is to ignore the haters (easier said than done i know). But if this is causing you stress and your not enjoying it anymore, dont bend over backwards for people you ultimately dont know. I’ve enjoyed this story, but prioritise your family and personal life first. Hang in there mate
I’m sorry to hear youve been getting abuse and it sounds like you’ve been going through some really tough times. My advice is to ignore the haters (easier said than done i know). But if this is causing you stress and your not enjoying it anymore, dont bend over backwards for people you ultimately dont know. I’ve enjoyed this story, but prioritise your family and personal life first. Hang in there mate
12/2/2024 c35 Maddie0825
please update i am really enjoying this story and i would like to see what happens net
please update i am really enjoying this story and i would like to see what happens net
12/2/2024 c35
10Logan'slover
I am sorry you are going through all this craziness on this website and in your life. I have just recently started this story and love it.

I am sorry you are going through all this craziness on this website and in your life. I have just recently started this story and love it.
11/29/2024 c35 Guest
Sorry you are have a rough time. Have faith things will improve. I am enjoying your work and thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful holiday
Rusty Hava.
Sorry you are have a rough time. Have faith things will improve. I am enjoying your work and thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful holiday
Rusty Hava.
11/29/2024 c35 Vik19
Hi,
I'm very sorry to hear all this shit you had to go through. I was reading your work and I was very interested, I liked it very much.
I understand that you're going to discontinue this novel. I hope it is not true and you have the possibility to continue it, maybe somewhere else...
May it be possible for you to let us that are interested know whether we can find your work somewhere else?
Thank you in advance if you can, but I'll understand if you don't want.
Hi,
I'm very sorry to hear all this shit you had to go through. I was reading your work and I was very interested, I liked it very much.
I understand that you're going to discontinue this novel. I hope it is not true and you have the possibility to continue it, maybe somewhere else...
May it be possible for you to let us that are interested know whether we can find your work somewhere else?
Thank you in advance if you can, but I'll understand if you don't want.
11/30/2024 c29
15Ravengrad
As a man who at the age of 21 looked his father in the eye from a hospital bed saying, “I’m done. I can’t fight anymore. Love you.” Before entering a coma. I came out the other end with a doctor looking at me shaking his head.
So yea there is a point where it hurts too much.

As a man who at the age of 21 looked his father in the eye from a hospital bed saying, “I’m done. I can’t fight anymore. Love you.” Before entering a coma. I came out the other end with a doctor looking at me shaking his head.
So yea there is a point where it hurts too much.