for Friend or Foe10/31/2017 c31 mandiecandie
So i really enjoy this story. The plot is great. I look forward to seeing every thing play out.
Im having a hard time figuring out how much time has passed. Everyone seems to be doing to much each day. Other than Hermione being in the coma for a week its seems no one is getting sleep.
So i really enjoy this story. The plot is great. I look forward to seeing every thing play out.
Im having a hard time figuring out how much time has passed. Everyone seems to be doing to much each day. Other than Hermione being in the coma for a week its seems no one is getting sleep.
10/30/2017 c19 kurolothgarian
Whoops! Earlier, you named Neville Longbottom as Hufflepuffs' heir, now it's Susan Bones.
Whoops! Earlier, you named Neville Longbottom as Hufflepuffs' heir, now it's Susan Bones.
10/30/2017 c18 MariCenorina
she's literally bedridden from pain and your Harry thinks this is the right time to chastise her? smh í can't with this story
she's literally bedridden from pain and your Harry thinks this is the right time to chastise her? smh í can't with this story
10/30/2017 c16 MariCenorina
also why are most people overreacting to what Hermione said to madam bones? she's like 15, No? seems wayyy excessive
also why are most people overreacting to what Hermione said to madam bones? she's like 15, No? seems wayyy excessive
10/30/2017 c15 MariCenorina
I'm going to see your story to the end, as it has such a promising plot/story line... but there is something wayyy off for me... idk what it is though...
maybe I'm just one of the smallthat doesn't like your writing style... í don't know but í am going to finish this story... it's just a bit hard... everyone seems to be a characiture of themselves maybe?
but í am sorry you are going through hard things! and I'm happy you at least have one escape to be in!
I'm going to see your story to the end, as it has such a promising plot/story line... but there is something wayyy off for me... idk what it is though...
maybe I'm just one of the smallthat doesn't like your writing style... í don't know but í am going to finish this story... it's just a bit hard... everyone seems to be a characiture of themselves maybe?
but í am sorry you are going through hard things! and I'm happy you at least have one escape to be in!
10/25/2017 c31 twilliams1797
OK buddy. Not really a review other than to say I a really enjoying this story.
That said, I am rooting for you and you WILL make it through this latest round of depression and stress . You have made it through horrible circumstances and loss and you will make it through this as well.
I recall a time not all that long ago where I was lying my head on my wife's lap just crying be cause there was nothing I could do.
Somehow we survived l hold her up, she holds me up sometimes we are held up by others
I don't know what you believe, but I hold you up before the god I believe in, and. For you my friend I wish health ,prosperity and peace. If noons else is , I am rooting for you
OK buddy. Not really a review other than to say I a really enjoying this story.
That said, I am rooting for you and you WILL make it through this latest round of depression and stress . You have made it through horrible circumstances and loss and you will make it through this as well.
I recall a time not all that long ago where I was lying my head on my wife's lap just crying be cause there was nothing I could do.
Somehow we survived l hold her up, she holds me up sometimes we are held up by others
I don't know what you believe, but I hold you up before the god I believe in, and. For you my friend I wish health ,prosperity and peace. If noons else is , I am rooting for you
10/25/2017 c31 Guest
Hope your wife gets better soon
Hope your wife gets better soon
10/27/2017 c31 
3Bicycle Gremlin
I am really enjoying this story. I'm very sorry for all the pain and suffering you and your wife are going through. It's not fair for anyone to have to go through. I lost my mom in March if 2016 and it's a different type of pain but it's still a pain I have trouble dealing with at times. I wish you the best in finding a way to deal with yours.
I also wanted to offer my services to go through what you have written and edit it for you. There are lots of spelling and grammar mistakes that your other beta has missed. I can correct them for you and then you can post the edited chapters back up. If you'd like my help just send me a pm.
Keep up the writing. This story is really good.
3Bicycle GremlinI am really enjoying this story. I'm very sorry for all the pain and suffering you and your wife are going through. It's not fair for anyone to have to go through. I lost my mom in March if 2016 and it's a different type of pain but it's still a pain I have trouble dealing with at times. I wish you the best in finding a way to deal with yours.
I also wanted to offer my services to go through what you have written and edit it for you. There are lots of spelling and grammar mistakes that your other beta has missed. I can correct them for you and then you can post the edited chapters back up. If you'd like my help just send me a pm.
Keep up the writing. This story is really good.
10/25/2017 c31 16twilliams1797
just left a review from the mobile, and I just want to reiterate; You are not alone, many of us have gone through similar situations, we are rooting for you and yours.
Sometime I just want to scream. I write it out, as complete as I can, spell check, fix the punctuation and grammar, where I can (some rants and raves don't lend themselves to grammar), and once done, I read it over, and then delete it. You would be surprised at how refreshing that can be.
TimW
16twilliams1797just left a review from the mobile, and I just want to reiterate; You are not alone, many of us have gone through similar situations, we are rooting for you and yours.
Sometime I just want to scream. I write it out, as complete as I can, spell check, fix the punctuation and grammar, where I can (some rants and raves don't lend themselves to grammar), and once done, I read it over, and then delete it. You would be surprised at how refreshing that can be.
TimW
10/25/2017 c31 1Coru 32
thank you for this wonderful story in the wonderful chapter I really hope you're having a good day and having a good life
1Coru 32thank you for this wonderful story in the wonderful chapter I really hope you're having a good day and having a good life
10/24/2017 c31 1daithi4377
I can understand how Emma feels losing her husband, finding out she’s pregnant, her daughter married at fourteen lol and nearly losing her weeks later. Whether she consciously did it or not trying to make Hermione chose her and relative safety over her husband while Emma was still going to enjoy magic and being with Narcissa was a bit much. But then if you think about it the apple didn’t fall far from the tree as the reason that Harry had to make the decision he did was because Hermione didn’t listen thinking she knew better. They are both very similar and Harry and Narcissa are going to have their hands full. By this point even if Hermione separated from Harry it would do no good other than get them all killed. Emma reaction to this seems so much to Hermione reaction to house elves and SPEW but this could have more deadly results than a dirty house and more manual work for witches and wizards.
1daithi4377I can understand how Emma feels losing her husband, finding out she’s pregnant, her daughter married at fourteen lol and nearly losing her weeks later. Whether she consciously did it or not trying to make Hermione chose her and relative safety over her husband while Emma was still going to enjoy magic and being with Narcissa was a bit much. But then if you think about it the apple didn’t fall far from the tree as the reason that Harry had to make the decision he did was because Hermione didn’t listen thinking she knew better. They are both very similar and Harry and Narcissa are going to have their hands full. By this point even if Hermione separated from Harry it would do no good other than get them all killed. Emma reaction to this seems so much to Hermione reaction to house elves and SPEW but this could have more deadly results than a dirty house and more manual work for witches and wizards.