for Friend or Foe9/25/2016 c20 SLYNNR
IT WOULD MAKE SENSE THAT WITH EVERYTHING THAT IS HAPPENING THEY WOULD HAVE EMOTIONAL CONTROL ISSUES. THAT COULD TOTALLY LEAD TO HORMONES GONE CRAZY.
IT WOULD MAKE SENSE THAT WITH EVERYTHING THAT IS HAPPENING THEY WOULD HAVE EMOTIONAL CONTROL ISSUES. THAT COULD TOTALLY LEAD TO HORMONES GONE CRAZY.
9/24/2016 c20 
1daithi4377
That vision did not sound promising. Wil Lucius and Dumbledore succeed in kidnapping Hermione, will Harry get her back before she endures more torture? Hopefully Amelia clues into Lucius joining up with the old man.
1daithi4377That vision did not sound promising. Wil Lucius and Dumbledore succeed in kidnapping Hermione, will Harry get her back before she endures more torture? Hopefully Amelia clues into Lucius joining up with the old man.
9/24/2016 c20 tlc125
I don't mind a powerful Harry, but not a demanding one. It hasn't gotten that far and I hope it won't. I wonder what's happening to them?
Dumbledore needs to be gotten rid of as well as Malfoy.
I'm glad Sirius and Amy are making progress. Good chapter. Thanks.
I don't mind a powerful Harry, but not a demanding one. It hasn't gotten that far and I hope it won't. I wonder what's happening to them?
Dumbledore needs to be gotten rid of as well as Malfoy.
I'm glad Sirius and Amy are making progress. Good chapter. Thanks.
9/24/2016 c5 Sturmundsterne
Way too many typos, grammar issues, and the like. While I like a Dumbles story as much as the next guy, it has to be mechanically well written to hold interest. This one isn't. Good luck in the future, but I am done here.
Way too many typos, grammar issues, and the like. While I like a Dumbles story as much as the next guy, it has to be mechanically well written to hold interest. This one isn't. Good luck in the future, but I am done here.
9/20/2016 c3 csheila
Nice cliffhanger (lucky I caught this story late, or I would be screaming ;)
Good job on letting characters feel the change
Nice cliffhanger (lucky I caught this story late, or I would be screaming ;)
Good job on letting characters feel the change
9/18/2016 c2 Guest
And harry Potter is British based, less of the American stuff and put more mum and trousers instead of pants
And harry Potter is British based, less of the American stuff and put more mum and trousers instead of pants
9/18/2016 c17 d
can't wait for more
can't wait for more
9/18/2016 c2 Guest
'Harry can turn his attention supposed to be with'?
That make no sense? Have you missed something out here?!
'Harry can turn his attention supposed to be with'?
That make no sense? Have you missed something out here?!
9/18/2016 c1 Guest
Get your too,to and two right!
Oh and the spelling is probably with a y, not an e
Get your too,to and two right!
Oh and the spelling is probably with a y, not an e
9/19/2016 c7 1EdwardBellaRenesmeCullen
Good luck with your story. I can't stand read story you make Harry called her Maya so annoy like I read someone else not hermione. Mione better than ugly Maya name.
1EdwardBellaRenesmeCullenGood luck with your story. I can't stand read story you make Harry called her Maya so annoy like I read someone else not hermione. Mione better than ugly Maya name.