for Friend or Foe8/21/2016 c6 Ronin Kenshin
hey this is good work I like your fic don't listen to the haters keep up good work
hey this is good work I like your fic don't listen to the haters keep up good work
8/21/2016 c14 
1daithi4377
Dumbledore has a lot to answer for. Severus is going to be unbearable when he regains consciousness and they are going to have their hands full preventing him from going and killing Dumbledore right there and then. I don't know what will be worse for him the fact that someone broke into his mind and turned him into the dark hate ridden person against a little boy or the fact that one man has caused him to lose so much. Poor Amelia she us in for one shock after another I hope her heart can handle it. Arthur was smart going to Amelia right away cause you know that at least Molly and Ron are going to cause problems.
1daithi4377Dumbledore has a lot to answer for. Severus is going to be unbearable when he regains consciousness and they are going to have their hands full preventing him from going and killing Dumbledore right there and then. I don't know what will be worse for him the fact that someone broke into his mind and turned him into the dark hate ridden person against a little boy or the fact that one man has caused him to lose so much. Poor Amelia she us in for one shock after another I hope her heart can handle it. Arthur was smart going to Amelia right away cause you know that at least Molly and Ron are going to cause problems.
8/20/2016 c13 guest
interesting plotting but the characters are very cardboard and one dimensional. They have no depth beyond 'me BAD' or 'me GOOD'.
keep writing, keep trying, and you will improve
interesting plotting but the characters are very cardboard and one dimensional. They have no depth beyond 'me BAD' or 'me GOOD'.
keep writing, keep trying, and you will improve
8/20/2016 c13 15Vegasman59
Well that was good, I can't wait to see Molly arrested for poisoning Harry and Hermione. Albus is about to have a major Heart attack, and poor Severus is about to be cured of several debilitating mind curses. The Fit is really going to hit the Shan!
15Vegasman59Well that was good, I can't wait to see Molly arrested for poisoning Harry and Hermione. Albus is about to have a major Heart attack, and poor Severus is about to be cured of several debilitating mind curses. The Fit is really going to hit the Shan!
8/20/2016 c6 7KalKir
Just read the Author's Note in the beginning of this chapter. I did notice a few "mistakes" but I personally think they are minor ones that can be overlooked. Your writing is much better than many others and your stiry has a very interesting and well thought out background so far. I know I still got a few chaoters before I catch up to the latest chapter, but just wantrd to say I like what I am reading so far and want you to keepbit up! Also not sure since I am not in the medical field, but hope that you recover from your illness. Thanks again for posting this story! Looking forwsrd to all the future chapters to come!
7KalKirJust read the Author's Note in the beginning of this chapter. I did notice a few "mistakes" but I personally think they are minor ones that can be overlooked. Your writing is much better than many others and your stiry has a very interesting and well thought out background so far. I know I still got a few chaoters before I catch up to the latest chapter, but just wantrd to say I like what I am reading so far and want you to keepbit up! Also not sure since I am not in the medical field, but hope that you recover from your illness. Thanks again for posting this story! Looking forwsrd to all the future chapters to come!
8/20/2016 c13 84hermoine snape
Geat new chapter. Molly is going to cause a lot of problems. I cant wait please update soon.
84hermoine snapeGeat new chapter. Molly is going to cause a lot of problems. I cant wait please update soon.
8/20/2016 c5 shronktikar1504
Need a favour- Please stop calling HERMIONE, MAYA.
Kinda reduces the feel of the story...if you know what I mean...
Need a favour- Please stop calling HERMIONE, MAYA.
Kinda reduces the feel of the story...if you know what I mean...
8/19/2016 c13 1daithi4377
So did just the paper with Dumbles plans go up flames? Where are the two ohoenixes weren't they supposed to have shown up after the kids woke up? Hard to believe how such a little breeze can make so many changes? I can just imagine the goblin meetings that Filius will have today lol...I'm pretty sure it will not be for the betterment of Dumbles either! Please please let Molly get caught going against Arthur's order...cast her out and her little demons too! I just love this story!
1daithi4377So did just the paper with Dumbles plans go up flames? Where are the two ohoenixes weren't they supposed to have shown up after the kids woke up? Hard to believe how such a little breeze can make so many changes? I can just imagine the goblin meetings that Filius will have today lol...I'm pretty sure it will not be for the betterment of Dumbles either! Please please let Molly get caught going against Arthur's order...cast her out and her little demons too! I just love this story!