for Friend or Foe8/12/2016 c11 Sandra
What a terrible time to end it. I just found FRIEND OR FOE and got to read the start in one go. I was terribly disappointed to not see another right arrow. I'm enjoying the story very much and can't wait to see where you are going. I think Draco is a little off, even if he wasn't his father's son he's not going to lose the pureblood arrogance that fast. Otherwise I like the new direction he's going in. Can't wait to see more. Thank you for taking the time and effort to share your vision with us.
What a terrible time to end it. I just found FRIEND OR FOE and got to read the start in one go. I was terribly disappointed to not see another right arrow. I'm enjoying the story very much and can't wait to see where you are going. I think Draco is a little off, even if he wasn't his father's son he's not going to lose the pureblood arrogance that fast. Otherwise I like the new direction he's going in. Can't wait to see more. Thank you for taking the time and effort to share your vision with us.
8/12/2016 c5 Martin
Hi,
I'm AM enjoying your story but one thing is bothering me. Hermione has just lost both her parents but it seems after a very brief period of upset she is now fine and having sex with Harry. That seems a little quick to me, personally I've not lost either parent yet (thankfully) but if I was to do so, I'd need a lot more time to recover and sex would be the last thing on my mind. Also, you may want to consider getting a beta reader as there a few errors creeping in.
Hi,
I'm AM enjoying your story but one thing is bothering me. Hermione has just lost both her parents but it seems after a very brief period of upset she is now fine and having sex with Harry. That seems a little quick to me, personally I've not lost either parent yet (thankfully) but if I was to do so, I'd need a lot more time to recover and sex would be the last thing on my mind. Also, you may want to consider getting a beta reader as there a few errors creeping in.
8/11/2016 c11 keller.obriant
Just a note tennis bracelets were not created until the 20th century. Don't really see a problem with it being jewelry that she uses it's just a tennis bracelet and that is what you call it wouldn't have existed back when Morgana was alive just throwing that out there so you know about it
Just a note tennis bracelets were not created until the 20th century. Don't really see a problem with it being jewelry that she uses it's just a tennis bracelet and that is what you call it wouldn't have existed back when Morgana was alive just throwing that out there so you know about it
8/11/2016 c11 
1daithi4377
Did Harry remember to bring the staff with him. If just receiving the power and magic of Merlin did this can you just imagine what Pendragons vault would have done to him.. So he has to keep Hermione close to him...Neville, Draco and Luna right? I noticed that while Bill was surprised he wasn't shocked by Molly's or Rons action...I think unconsciously he knew but needed the visual proof. He is quite a strong moral man judging by the fact that after that proof he was still able to go into the house within moments and carry on a conversation with his family as if nothing had just happened. It shouldn't take the twins long to get not only samples of the food for Harry, Ginny and possibly Hermione but also samples of the actual potion in the vial itself which should carry her magical signature as the brewer of it. More please!
1daithi4377Did Harry remember to bring the staff with him. If just receiving the power and magic of Merlin did this can you just imagine what Pendragons vault would have done to him.. So he has to keep Hermione close to him...Neville, Draco and Luna right? I noticed that while Bill was surprised he wasn't shocked by Molly's or Rons action...I think unconsciously he knew but needed the visual proof. He is quite a strong moral man judging by the fact that after that proof he was still able to go into the house within moments and carry on a conversation with his family as if nothing had just happened. It shouldn't take the twins long to get not only samples of the food for Harry, Ginny and possibly Hermione but also samples of the actual potion in the vial itself which should carry her magical signature as the brewer of it. More please!
8/9/2016 c10 Guest
Brilliant, just love it!
Brilliant, just love it!
8/8/2016 c10 Amber
Lovely story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Lovely story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
8/8/2016 c10 Dagda06117032
Maya isn't playing. LOL I do have a question as to if they are going to use their new titles and when.
Maya isn't playing. LOL I do have a question as to if they are going to use their new titles and when.