for All in His Head3/12 c1 
2TimelessBound
Intriguing !
In all the fanfics I have read till date, I haven't come across this take.
Well done.
2TimelessBoundIntriguing !
In all the fanfics I have read till date, I haven't come across this take.
Well done.
9/1/2016 c1 36RawMateriel
the atmosphere created in the first scene is on point. Spooky, the right level of gore and a well articulated air of smugness. Poor Hermione got some mild psychotic mercy. It's a good day to be Voldemort. I like the twist aswell, when they ask you to write a Voldemort!wins au but you can't help but have it at his expensethis was the first round I wrote Hermione for, although I love to read about her. All your Hermione prose have been such an inspiration. This included. Not even Voldemort can vibe with killing her. Great work, your characterisation is transcendent. Never stop !
36RawMaterielthe atmosphere created in the first scene is on point. Spooky, the right level of gore and a well articulated air of smugness. Poor Hermione got some mild psychotic mercy. It's a good day to be Voldemort. I like the twist aswell, when they ask you to write a Voldemort!wins au but you can't help but have it at his expensethis was the first round I wrote Hermione for, although I love to read about her. All your Hermione prose have been such an inspiration. This included. Not even Voldemort can vibe with killing her. Great work, your characterisation is transcendent. Never stop !
7/26/2016 c1 467NeonDomino
I loved this fic. The first part was so vivid, like everything was really happening with great detail, and I love how the scene just changed like that, and you find out that everything was his imagination!
I love how you incorporated Hermione into the first section, and linked it to her looking after Tom in the second, and the explaination of Harry too! Excellent writing (as always)! :D
467NeonDominoI loved this fic. The first part was so vivid, like everything was really happening with great detail, and I love how the scene just changed like that, and you find out that everything was his imagination!
I love how you incorporated Hermione into the first section, and linked it to her looking after Tom in the second, and the explaination of Harry too! Excellent writing (as always)! :D
7/25/2016 c1 SereniteRose
a very quirky one-shot thanks ever so much, you always write the best and most fun stories I've ever read. thanks ever so much.
a very quirky one-shot thanks ever so much, you always write the best and most fun stories I've ever read. thanks ever so much.
7/25/2016 c1 Suzululu4moe
Lol . Hermione and Harry.
Well at least Dumbles wasn't his neglectful father /grandfather that Sent him away to.
Or that Harry
Or snape a trusted male nurse who feed him liquid medicine . Or Bellatrix a niece who plays along with his shenanigans.
Lol . Hermione and Harry.
Well at least Dumbles wasn't his neglectful father /grandfather that Sent him away to.
Or that Harry
Or snape a trusted male nurse who feed him liquid medicine . Or Bellatrix a niece who plays along with his shenanigans.
7/24/2016 c1 Guest
Holy shit, Tom is a mentally ill patient and his favourite healer is Hermione, and all of the things that happened never really happened; it's all in his head? Lol that's rough :$
Holy shit, Tom is a mentally ill patient and his favourite healer is Hermione, and all of the things that happened never really happened; it's all in his head? Lol that's rough :$
7/24/2016 c1 ksouza3
This was definitely a interesting story and plot. I liked the ending how with the way you revealed the setting the story was really taking place. I also really liked Tom's last comment and description for how he looked at Hermione. Thanks for writing!
This was definitely a interesting story and plot. I liked the ending how with the way you revealed the setting the story was really taking place. I also really liked Tom's last comment and description for how he looked at Hermione. Thanks for writing!