7/26/2016 c1 AuthorGirl123
I love this chapter of the crossover fan fiction. My only complaint is that you have a few spelling errors, which you can easily correct, seeing that the errors are only slight. I love the way your vocab is big-girl vocab, not just sad, mad, happy, but instead walked you put stalked, and given the mood of that scene, I think it was much more appropriate.

Can't wait to read Chapter 2!