for To Kill a Bull3/3 c26 Guest
I love this fic :)
I love this fic :)
2/20 c6 KingOfEmptyness
right she spent her whole life trying to almost fail and now she done what she wanted she is what angry, this is too stupid such an idiotic way of making the team past
right she spent her whole life trying to almost fail and now she done what she wanted she is what angry, this is too stupid such an idiotic way of making the team past
2/10 c9 
2FieldMarshal1915
Lmao Isekai'd Sakura here is gonna end up like Tanya, do everything in the world to not be noticed or excellent, then become a badass S-Rank Ninja
2FieldMarshal1915Lmao Isekai'd Sakura here is gonna end up like Tanya, do everything in the world to not be noticed or excellent, then become a badass S-Rank Ninja
2/2 c1 zonzog
Wow this TV "metaphor" was terrible and needlessly convoluted. Perhaps on purpose, but still terrible though.
Wow this TV "metaphor" was terrible and needlessly convoluted. Perhaps on purpose, but still terrible though.
10/26/2022 c1 1Eadlyn I
coming back again and rereading this Fanfiction. Still love it.i hope you find your muse soon
1Eadlyn Icoming back again and rereading this Fanfiction. Still love it.i hope you find your muse soon
10/9/2022 c26 Guest 69
Hey, just binged these chapters, and can I just say, wow! I was hoping it would be completed ‘cause of the high word count, but alas, you can’t have everything. I was a bit put off in the beginning because you said Sakura would be a big coward and I like the fics where the MC is powerful, or at least becomes strong enough to help her teammates, but this was a pleasant surprise! I recently read a fanfic, “Scorpion’s Disciple,” about Sasori taking Naruto on as a disciple of sorts and Naruto becoming stronger and smart—not stupid or naive, like he had been in canon. I loved it and googled for fics similar to it, and found your story somehow. I’m glad I did and will be waiting for more chapters! Since I don’t have an account, unfortunately I’m reviewing as a guest, but I just wanted to let you know you’re doing an impressive job of making this fic something I would wait for more updates for (I’m a picky reader and not very patient ). Anyway, thank you for creating this and taking the time to check for spelling/grammatical errors! (Btw, you’re supposed to write “cool.” Instead of “cool”. Or ‘Jeez.’ Instead of ‘Jeez’. And such. Just wanted to let you know so you could potentially avoid that in the future.) No need to rewrite chapters several times, too—it adds to time to make more chapters, and I really want more chapters to add to my addiction ! Often, the first decision is the best decision. If you feel you hate something, ofc, change it, but don’t feel pressured to make a chapter perfect—no one is :). I prob won’t post another review since I’ve never reviewed a fic in my life and this is my first one, so just know someone admires your work and you’ve gained a fan . Thank you again for your time and creativity put into this fanfic! (Btw I love your Author’s notes and the fact that you take the time to put in your honest opinions and make an effort to grow close with your readers, taking advice (ex. recap of chapters) to heart and accepting it.)
-Me, whose name is actually Sophia but since there are so many Sophias out there it’s not like I’ll be giving out any sensitive/personal info to strangers.
Hey, just binged these chapters, and can I just say, wow! I was hoping it would be completed ‘cause of the high word count, but alas, you can’t have everything. I was a bit put off in the beginning because you said Sakura would be a big coward and I like the fics where the MC is powerful, or at least becomes strong enough to help her teammates, but this was a pleasant surprise! I recently read a fanfic, “Scorpion’s Disciple,” about Sasori taking Naruto on as a disciple of sorts and Naruto becoming stronger and smart—not stupid or naive, like he had been in canon. I loved it and googled for fics similar to it, and found your story somehow. I’m glad I did and will be waiting for more chapters! Since I don’t have an account, unfortunately I’m reviewing as a guest, but I just wanted to let you know you’re doing an impressive job of making this fic something I would wait for more updates for (I’m a picky reader and not very patient ). Anyway, thank you for creating this and taking the time to check for spelling/grammatical errors! (Btw, you’re supposed to write “cool.” Instead of “cool”. Or ‘Jeez.’ Instead of ‘Jeez’. And such. Just wanted to let you know so you could potentially avoid that in the future.) No need to rewrite chapters several times, too—it adds to time to make more chapters, and I really want more chapters to add to my addiction ! Often, the first decision is the best decision. If you feel you hate something, ofc, change it, but don’t feel pressured to make a chapter perfect—no one is :). I prob won’t post another review since I’ve never reviewed a fic in my life and this is my first one, so just know someone admires your work and you’ve gained a fan . Thank you again for your time and creativity put into this fanfic! (Btw I love your Author’s notes and the fact that you take the time to put in your honest opinions and make an effort to grow close with your readers, taking advice (ex. recap of chapters) to heart and accepting it.)
-Me, whose name is actually Sophia but since there are so many Sophias out there it’s not like I’ll be giving out any sensitive/personal info to strangers.
9/22/2022 c13 enjoyedyourfic
I like your writing style. I do not like that Sakura is such a little bitch about everything. I get it, though. Far more realistic this way. Just not fun to read. I know people will of course disagree, but isn't it more fun to have a character who's competence and bravery is somehow made believable than it is to read about the panicked inner monologue of a person who acts competently but is a total and utter coward about everything?
anway, still very much enjoyed reading it and of course won't stop. Perhaps sakura will grow out of her cowardice. srsly, it's tedious to watch her panic 9 times in a row in one chapter
I like your writing style. I do not like that Sakura is such a little bitch about everything. I get it, though. Far more realistic this way. Just not fun to read. I know people will of course disagree, but isn't it more fun to have a character who's competence and bravery is somehow made believable than it is to read about the panicked inner monologue of a person who acts competently but is a total and utter coward about everything?
anway, still very much enjoyed reading it and of course won't stop. Perhaps sakura will grow out of her cowardice. srsly, it's tedious to watch her panic 9 times in a row in one chapter
9/10/2022 c26 bloodmosiac
hope ur doing ok! hope uni is going well and ur having fun!
i like to come back and reread this fic from time to time since it’s one of my favorites, i could probably print it out and read it page to page like a book thts how much i love it lol
hope ur doing ok! hope uni is going well and ur having fun!
i like to come back and reread this fic from time to time since it’s one of my favorites, i could probably print it out and read it page to page like a book thts how much i love it lol
9/9/2022 c8 LostZoro
If she was a spy, she would just continue acting average instead of doing that to Kakashi though. And besides one her teammate is an Uchiha so if she was a spy, then she would rather target Sasuke for his eyes instead of Kakashi’s bones or something. Idk how they came to that conclusion, unless they thought she was a sloppy spy?
If she was a spy, she would just continue acting average instead of doing that to Kakashi though. And besides one her teammate is an Uchiha so if she was a spy, then she would rather target Sasuke for his eyes instead of Kakashi’s bones or something. Idk how they came to that conclusion, unless they thought she was a sloppy spy?
9/9/2022 c7 LostZoro
Sakura, girl, at this point you don’t need to justify your contradicting actions just do what you want to do
Sakura, girl, at this point you don’t need to justify your contradicting actions just do what you want to do
9/9/2022 c6 LostZoro
Isn’t this what she wanted? For them to view her as “doing nothing, just an average girl”? Idk why she got mad when it’s what she wanted. You even wanted to purposely fail this test so what gives?
and clearly the speech was just to test you duhhh use your “smart“ adult mind xD
Btw this comment is for the SI not the story itself
Isn’t this what she wanted? For them to view her as “doing nothing, just an average girl”? Idk why she got mad when it’s what she wanted. You even wanted to purposely fail this test so what gives?
and clearly the speech was just to test you duhhh use your “smart“ adult mind xD
Btw this comment is for the SI not the story itself
9/9/2022 c3 LostZoro
“You can seat with us”
Lol is this Mean Girls? xD
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And Sakura 2.0 you really hate children hahahaha
“You can seat with us”
Lol is this Mean Girls? xD
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And Sakura 2.0 you really hate children hahahaha
8/3/2022 c17 Guest
this is the cutest shit i have ever seen im dying oml
love love love this fic so much 3
this is the cutest shit i have ever seen im dying oml
love love love this fic so much 3
7/26/2022 c9 Guest
i really, REALLY tried to get past the whole “i’m in naruto and i have to get out” trope but i honestly couldn’t. this fic is well written but it’s irritating to see sakura be this “holier than thou” person who avoids all her problems
i really, REALLY tried to get past the whole “i’m in naruto and i have to get out” trope but i honestly couldn’t. this fic is well written but it’s irritating to see sakura be this “holier than thou” person who avoids all her problems