
12/27/2019 c26
2NiceTri
I love this story because it's really fresh! This chunin exams has a totally different spin than most of the other Naruto fics out there and I love it!

I love this story because it's really fresh! This chunin exams has a totally different spin than most of the other Naruto fics out there and I love it!
12/23/2019 c26 RyuugiAzuma
This is an amazing story. I love it. Usually when I read fanfictions, I don't bother to reread them again since I just don't feel like going through the entire story again. This story I read through twice. After doing that, about a week later, I read it again. It was just that good. Thank you for making this amazing story, as well as having an original plot that still somewhat follows the original. It makes this story stand out from the other SI!Sakura fanfictions (or just any OC in Naruto as a Naruto character fanfiction). The OCs are all amazing, and everything feels so lifelike, it's almost as if I'm actually there, at the scene, watching it happen. Amazing story.
This is an amazing story. I love it. Usually when I read fanfictions, I don't bother to reread them again since I just don't feel like going through the entire story again. This story I read through twice. After doing that, about a week later, I read it again. It was just that good. Thank you for making this amazing story, as well as having an original plot that still somewhat follows the original. It makes this story stand out from the other SI!Sakura fanfictions (or just any OC in Naruto as a Naruto character fanfiction). The OCs are all amazing, and everything feels so lifelike, it's almost as if I'm actually there, at the scene, watching it happen. Amazing story.
12/13/2019 c26
1Ookamihime Ichimaru
Still so good! And I hate to be THAT reviewer but like...LeeSaku~ for this story anyway. Or SakuKaka. Her and Kakashi already have such cute teasing banter~ id be cute if she was of age. Alas, LeeSaku!

Still so good! And I hate to be THAT reviewer but like...LeeSaku~ for this story anyway. Or SakuKaka. Her and Kakashi already have such cute teasing banter~ id be cute if she was of age. Alas, LeeSaku!
11/17/2019 c26 Guest
Is there any chance this story might ever be updated, or is it abandoned?
Is there any chance this story might ever be updated, or is it abandoned?
11/13/2019 c26 FlightyFuschia
I just read thru your chapters like a fiend. At first I didn't actually like your terrified, taciturn version of OC Sakura, but halfway thru I realized, to quote Dune, fear is the mind killer, and you depict that internal battle with such unforgiving grit. Your OC characters somehow burst onto the page with life, and you've the gumption to just rip into Naurto's naivety mercilessly. I've rarely read such a horrifying scene as that battle against Orochimaru and his facemelt. I love how your writing lended to the action, barely coherent, with reactions and senses tumbling over each other like multiple waves competing to reach the shore. Ah man, where will you go next? I hope Sakura gets her verbal suspicions from Temari in time to change something. However that pales in comparison to what her fear of two jinchuuriki will drive her to do next... Right, so obviously I'll be waiting on my tiptoes for the next update, whenever you've the time. May the muses be with you.
I just read thru your chapters like a fiend. At first I didn't actually like your terrified, taciturn version of OC Sakura, but halfway thru I realized, to quote Dune, fear is the mind killer, and you depict that internal battle with such unforgiving grit. Your OC characters somehow burst onto the page with life, and you've the gumption to just rip into Naurto's naivety mercilessly. I've rarely read such a horrifying scene as that battle against Orochimaru and his facemelt. I love how your writing lended to the action, barely coherent, with reactions and senses tumbling over each other like multiple waves competing to reach the shore. Ah man, where will you go next? I hope Sakura gets her verbal suspicions from Temari in time to change something. However that pales in comparison to what her fear of two jinchuuriki will drive her to do next... Right, so obviously I'll be waiting on my tiptoes for the next update, whenever you've the time. May the muses be with you.
11/5/2019 c26 Maze of Fans
one of the best SI Sakura fics that's for sure :) I like how you diverge from the plot.
one of the best SI Sakura fics that's for sure :) I like how you diverge from the plot.
10/31/2019 c26 Guest
I love what you’ve done with this
I love what you’ve done with this
10/29/2019 c24
26TSOHG A MA I
These are probably some of the best action scenes I've ever read in fanfiction. Maybe anywhere. It really gives an whole new definition to"It all happened so fast."

These are probably some of the best action scenes I've ever read in fanfiction. Maybe anywhere. It really gives an whole new definition to"It all happened so fast."
10/22/2019 c26 owlzilla
This story is almost upsettingly good. I am rooting for Sakura so hard I can barely breathe when she gets into fights. I just want her to tear through everyone like wet paper.
I’m happy to see Shikamaru showing up in later chapters - even if it’s only in brief flashes. He’s hands down my favorite character and if I were there he would be one of the only people I would go out of my way to talk to.
Is it weird that I want Naruto’s friendship jutsu to somehow work on Gaara so they can all be friends? I find everything about Sakura relatable - except for the, is mean to everyone and wants no friends. I wouldn’t consider myself social by any stretch, but everyone needs a friend.
Anyway, great job on this story! I hope you update it soon.
This story is almost upsettingly good. I am rooting for Sakura so hard I can barely breathe when she gets into fights. I just want her to tear through everyone like wet paper.
I’m happy to see Shikamaru showing up in later chapters - even if it’s only in brief flashes. He’s hands down my favorite character and if I were there he would be one of the only people I would go out of my way to talk to.
Is it weird that I want Naruto’s friendship jutsu to somehow work on Gaara so they can all be friends? I find everything about Sakura relatable - except for the, is mean to everyone and wants no friends. I wouldn’t consider myself social by any stretch, but everyone needs a friend.
Anyway, great job on this story! I hope you update it soon.
10/18/2019 c26 revinzy
HOLY SHHHHHHTTT ITS BEEN A LONG TIME SINCE I READ SI FANFIC THIS GOOD! I love the way you characterized Sakura! I love the way you organize the plot as original as you could do, it was awesome! Please update this when you have time, we readers definitely will wait for the updates
HOLY SHHHHHHTTT ITS BEEN A LONG TIME SINCE I READ SI FANFIC THIS GOOD! I love the way you characterized Sakura! I love the way you organize the plot as original as you could do, it was awesome! Please update this when you have time, we readers definitely will wait for the updates
10/17/2019 c9 Guest
you know ... personally i would not have taken it as a threat but as a declaration of war and start planning the downfall of the village that very day...
you know ... personally i would not have taken it as a threat but as a declaration of war and start planning the downfall of the village that very day...
10/17/2019 c7 Guest
and now your character starts lying to herself ... this story is becoming disgusting ...
and now your character starts lying to herself ... this story is becoming disgusting ...
10/17/2019 c6 Guest
yeah what a nice reason you have given in the comments but in the end it is still a stupid and artificial way to advance the plot the way you want and intrupts the flow of the story with illogical events ...
yeah what a nice reason you have given in the comments but in the end it is still a stupid and artificial way to advance the plot the way you want and intrupts the flow of the story with illogical events ...