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14/11/2021 c26 Gakigakigaki
My Love for this fic is so big, it's so prefecttttt️
My Love for this fic is so big, it's so prefecttttt️
4/10/2021 c26 Guest
I love this fic️
I love this fic️
2/20/2021 c26 Yoinkur
Absolutely amazing story! One of the best Naruto fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading, hands down. I can't remember the last time I got so engrossed in one that I spent an all-nighter staying up to read it to the latest chapter.
I just love the character you've given Sakura. 'What? Ninjas? Oh shit! Ninjas are fucking scary, everything is going to kill me!' Beautifully done. I most especially like how you managed to make her a prodigy without making her a Mary-sue type of character. The flaws in her and her actions are beautifully written.
As an English-Uni graduate, I can say that your spelling and grammar are actually quite wonderful, and I just have to compliment you on your action scenes as they were super enjoyable.
Unfortunately it looks like this fic is dropped, and while I would love for it to continue, I understand that's not always in the works. Thank you regardless for the amazing read! I'm now about to jump into your Kyoko fic (and oh, yes! 700,000 words here I come! :D ) and I can't wait to read it!
I honestly recommend you try your hand at a story of your own and if you do (or already have one published) let me know as I would love to read it.
Thank you again for the amazing read, truly. Hope you're doing well and good luck with your future endeavors.
Absolutely amazing story! One of the best Naruto fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading, hands down. I can't remember the last time I got so engrossed in one that I spent an all-nighter staying up to read it to the latest chapter.
I just love the character you've given Sakura. 'What? Ninjas? Oh shit! Ninjas are fucking scary, everything is going to kill me!' Beautifully done. I most especially like how you managed to make her a prodigy without making her a Mary-sue type of character. The flaws in her and her actions are beautifully written.
As an English-Uni graduate, I can say that your spelling and grammar are actually quite wonderful, and I just have to compliment you on your action scenes as they were super enjoyable.
Unfortunately it looks like this fic is dropped, and while I would love for it to continue, I understand that's not always in the works. Thank you regardless for the amazing read! I'm now about to jump into your Kyoko fic (and oh, yes! 700,000 words here I come! :D ) and I can't wait to read it!
I honestly recommend you try your hand at a story of your own and if you do (or already have one published) let me know as I would love to read it.
Thank you again for the amazing read, truly. Hope you're doing well and good luck with your future endeavors.
2/16/2021 c20 GreatT'Phon1of4
You know, substituting with kunai is basically knockoff bargain bin hiraishin. I'm not getting those vibes from OC Sakura though, so it's probably not intentional?
You know, substituting with kunai is basically knockoff bargain bin hiraishin. I'm not getting those vibes from OC Sakura though, so it's probably not intentional?
2/8/2021 c6 Decontractee
I mean, Kakashi is right. Being seen as second is good and all, but she should still try to be the best that she could be. In a situation where she wants the team to fail convincingly, what she should do is seem to try her best with the team, and failing regardless of showing her "best"
I mean, Kakashi is right. Being seen as second is good and all, but she should still try to be the best that she could be. In a situation where she wants the team to fail convincingly, what she should do is seem to try her best with the team, and failing regardless of showing her "best"
2/3/2021 c2 Guest
aaaahahahahahahah this SI is retarded! The world is fundamentally unchanged in terms of class and power-structure from a thousand years ago; all that's changed is the window dressing.
aaaahahahahahahah this SI is retarded! The world is fundamentally unchanged in terms of class and power-structure from a thousand years ago; all that's changed is the window dressing.
2/2/2021 c6 AngelousPoofy
SAKURAS INTRODUCTION GOT ME ROLLINGGGG! SERIOUSLY HER RESPONSES ARE GOLD. ABSOLUTE DIAMONDS.
SAKURAS INTRODUCTION GOT ME ROLLINGGGG! SERIOUSLY HER RESPONSES ARE GOLD. ABSOLUTE DIAMONDS.
1/29/2021 c26 chamiesgirl
Wow this story is amazing. I know it’s been a few years, but any plans to start writing again?
Wow this story is amazing. I know it’s been a few years, but any plans to start writing again?
1/18/2021 c15 nessiesmith2012
im really glad that even though naruto had an outburst he wasn't told anything that would let him rationalize it as not his fault. cause i agree with sakura and sasuke, naruto does stupid things. and is hardly held accountable.
think of his childhood. in a military run village, a trainee running around vandalizing and graffiting public property and the hokage at the time just let it be. if another kid who was not naruto did half the shit naruto got away with, got caught doing things like naruto he would probably be kicked out the program.
im really glad that even though naruto had an outburst he wasn't told anything that would let him rationalize it as not his fault. cause i agree with sakura and sasuke, naruto does stupid things. and is hardly held accountable.
think of his childhood. in a military run village, a trainee running around vandalizing and graffiting public property and the hokage at the time just let it be. if another kid who was not naruto did half the shit naruto got away with, got caught doing things like naruto he would probably be kicked out the program.
1/3/2021 c26 MissingInspiration
It's been over 3 years... but I'm gonna ask anyways. Is there any chance of this story being updated? I am absolutely in love with it! I found it several years ago and unfortunately didn't save it at the time but I FOUND IT! It's just as amazing as I remember, if not better. I love the characterization of everyone and I would die happy if this was updated again. Kudos for such great writing!
It's been over 3 years... but I'm gonna ask anyways. Is there any chance of this story being updated? I am absolutely in love with it! I found it several years ago and unfortunately didn't save it at the time but I FOUND IT! It's just as amazing as I remember, if not better. I love the characterization of everyone and I would die happy if this was updated again. Kudos for such great writing!
1/1/2021 c26 JijiUkiR
Well, you certainly can write combat scenes, I was as speechless as Sakura Sasuke and Temari in that last chapter (that teamwork!). I love all the changes you have done in the canon, particularly with the chunin exam and the last few chapters were particularly brilliant I mean this fic is really a good read I could barely stop even when I had to but the way you wrote the Orochimaru portion holy shit I could feel their fear though my bones!
I love your Sakura, being in her head is like a treat, She is flaw yes but in a way that makes her choices her plan just everything more believable even thought it looks like she can’t escape what is coming (thank god! haha). I also crave every interaction she has with others that’s probably why sometimes I feel unsatisfied with some dialogs as if they were cut short?
Just so you know I found it on AO3 as a repost from someone else! Character-centric is my favorite kind by far (and Sakura my recent obsession) and yours tick all my boxes. It’s frightening how I could have never known of its existence because it’s only on FFN. It tells how much I love it!
Well, you certainly can write combat scenes, I was as speechless as Sakura Sasuke and Temari in that last chapter (that teamwork!). I love all the changes you have done in the canon, particularly with the chunin exam and the last few chapters were particularly brilliant I mean this fic is really a good read I could barely stop even when I had to but the way you wrote the Orochimaru portion holy shit I could feel their fear though my bones!
I love your Sakura, being in her head is like a treat, She is flaw yes but in a way that makes her choices her plan just everything more believable even thought it looks like she can’t escape what is coming (thank god! haha). I also crave every interaction she has with others that’s probably why sometimes I feel unsatisfied with some dialogs as if they were cut short?
Just so you know I found it on AO3 as a repost from someone else! Character-centric is my favorite kind by far (and Sakura my recent obsession) and yours tick all my boxes. It’s frightening how I could have never known of its existence because it’s only on FFN. It tells how much I love it!
12/31/2020 c1 Guest
Hey, someone on AO3 copy pasted your story without your permission and posted it under their name. they said they were doing it for bookmarking purposes, but since they didn't ask for permission I wanted to make you aware. The person plagiarizing is called Pinapple168. The ID of the story on AO3 is 28424184.
A lot of people, me included, would love it if this story was on AO3 too because many people have left ffnet in favour of AO3, but that doesn't mean plagiarizing should be allowed.
Once you get that author to take it down, I would love it if you'd consider crossposting this story to AO3. I no longer use ffnet so being able to favourite this story and keep an eye on it for re-reads or for updates would be easier on ffnet.
Happy New Year's Eve.
Hey, someone on AO3 copy pasted your story without your permission and posted it under their name. they said they were doing it for bookmarking purposes, but since they didn't ask for permission I wanted to make you aware. The person plagiarizing is called Pinapple168. The ID of the story on AO3 is 28424184.
A lot of people, me included, would love it if this story was on AO3 too because many people have left ffnet in favour of AO3, but that doesn't mean plagiarizing should be allowed.
Once you get that author to take it down, I would love it if you'd consider crossposting this story to AO3. I no longer use ffnet so being able to favourite this story and keep an eye on it for re-reads or for updates would be easier on ffnet.
Happy New Year's Eve.