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4/14/2020 c4 SnowingCrystals
This is really good!
4/14/2020 c3 SnowingCrystals
Damn, voldemort's dead, well I look foward to see how you write this, looks great! Makes sense that Pansy wouldn't be a big fan of religion and I respect your opinion. As a religous person, it's not offending at all to me (any fellow muslims, here? :D), I'm interested the OC Pansy ends up with whomever they are. Great chapter as always!
4/14/2020 c2 SnowingCrystals
I'm really happy for petunia, good for her. This is really good! Plus I'm super happy you're not doing ships with canon characters, ngl ocs with canon aren't usually my cup of tea.
7/19/2019 c5 6NotWeird
First off I LOVE the story so far and I'm super excited to see Pansy at Hogwarts! It's so sweet how she focuses on making Petunia feel included/special (though she mistepped that at first- but hey, she's learning! I appreciate that!). It also makes total sense that she'd be closer to her than Lily since "three years older" (physically) puts her a lot closer to Pansy's mental age.

Not usually a fan of shopping sprees in HP fanfic but I feel like this was handled really well! We got to linger on things that Pansy actually liked/may have use for in the future instead of looking at Cool Things Because They're Cool. I'm also desperately in love with all the subversions you've thrown in! SIOC isn't the only canon change, they don't immediately understand how to interact with strangers, their weirdness is noted and remarked upon in-universe etc etc

Alright I need to stop gushing or I'll be here all day X) anyways, loved the fic and looking forward to where it goes!
4/2/2019 c5 fightingstoryaddiction
interesting story im kind of hooked on this and looking forward to reading more will there be more? if so great if not its okay thank you for sharing your thoughs if you dont have the time or drive to write your imagination down anymore could you perhaps leave a short summary on as a short story line on how it all would have gone in the end anyways thank you for taking time and writng this all down i enjoyed it thank you
1/1/2019 c5 alo8
Please please update!
7/25/2018 c5 Mari Wollsch
super great, when will you continua? hope you will update soon xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
6/25/2018 c5 1ToshimiOkami
Cute. Haven’t seen the addiction thing before, not sure how that’ll go. Wondering at what your conflict will be without his snakeyness. Overall looking forward to more
6/23/2018 c5 Guest
Please please update!
6/11/2018 c5 Silver303
great storyplz inform me when you update id like to follow this story
3/12/2018 c5 Big Fan
You capture how children interact really well, from her dropping the chess piece in surprise to the trying to make Severus reveal his magic by throwing the ball badly. It feels very real, like the Evans could be my neighbors. I do hope you come back this one soon :) Do you think she'll visit the Arithmancy teacher when she gets there?
2/27/2018 c5 2AnimeLover229
love it
12/30/2017 c5 3Mr. Meowington
YOU GOT TP BE KIDDING, IM SO SHOOKED LIKE I WANT TO READ MORE BUT MY CHANCES HAVE BEEN KICKED ONCE I REALIZED I REACHED CHAPTER 5...PLEASE UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN...
7/30/2017 c5 5TheTinyMouse
This is really good! I'm looking forward to reading the rest :)
7/29/2017 c5 Matecito
I love it! Please keep updating
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