
8/18/2019 c23 GorYase
Will Anakin create a New Force faction like a Bright Sith? A powerful Force stronger than Normal Sith but one who feel positive emotions like Love and friendship of course without this retarded rule of two.
Will Anakin create a New Force faction like a Bright Sith? A powerful Force stronger than Normal Sith but one who feel positive emotions like Love and friendship of course without this retarded rule of two.
8/18/2019 c23 JuliaAurelia
Excellent chapter! Thanks for the quick update! Loved that you set the meeting on Crait.
Loved all the political talk and the strategy for keeping Palpatine busy on two fronts that are actually one.
OMG, when Anakin finally lost it and let loose on Obi-wan was a powerful moment! It had to be done if they were ever going to be able to successfully complete any missions together. Obi-wan had to fully understand what had been going through Anakin's mind, especially about his mother.
"After we rescue Fulcrum, I want you to come home with me." He stopped walking, but didn't turn to her. Didn't move. "I want you to really...truly...meet your children."
He said nothing for a moment, then looked up at the ceiling of the cavern. In the distance, some kind of crystal creature slinked away, clinking as it did so. "As Vader?" he asked, his voice rough. "Or as their father?"
Padme didn't miss a beat. "As their father." I think this was my favorite part of the chapter!
I look forward to the next update!
Excellent chapter! Thanks for the quick update! Loved that you set the meeting on Crait.
Loved all the political talk and the strategy for keeping Palpatine busy on two fronts that are actually one.
OMG, when Anakin finally lost it and let loose on Obi-wan was a powerful moment! It had to be done if they were ever going to be able to successfully complete any missions together. Obi-wan had to fully understand what had been going through Anakin's mind, especially about his mother.
"After we rescue Fulcrum, I want you to come home with me." He stopped walking, but didn't turn to her. Didn't move. "I want you to really...truly...meet your children."
He said nothing for a moment, then looked up at the ceiling of the cavern. In the distance, some kind of crystal creature slinked away, clinking as it did so. "As Vader?" he asked, his voice rough. "Or as their father?"
Padme didn't miss a beat. "As their father." I think this was my favorite part of the chapter!
I look forward to the next update!
8/17/2019 c22
2LONE RANGER 97
I honestly don't know what to say in this review other than that this chapter has been entertaining as almost every chapter you've written in the story (which means it was very good) and and that I hope to read more chapters in the future.
P.S. By the way am I the only one that wishes there was an easier way to keep track of the stories that we read or want to read later like on Wattpad?

I honestly don't know what to say in this review other than that this chapter has been entertaining as almost every chapter you've written in the story (which means it was very good) and and that I hope to read more chapters in the future.
P.S. By the way am I the only one that wishes there was an easier way to keep track of the stories that we read or want to read later like on Wattpad?
8/16/2019 c22 GorYase
Hi! I just want to say that this fanfiction is perfect. Its my top First or second of all fanfictions i read and i read more than 500. At First it was mundane but after 13 or 14 chapters it really addicted me. I Love Anakins thoughts about what he is, Padme PoV is enjoyable too w high is weird even for me because i hate any order PoV Potter than MC. Story is not rushed. And CHC dont forgive after just sorry. Im waiting for more
Hi! I just want to say that this fanfiction is perfect. Its my top First or second of all fanfictions i read and i read more than 500. At First it was mundane but after 13 or 14 chapters it really addicted me. I Love Anakins thoughts about what he is, Padme PoV is enjoyable too w high is weird even for me because i hate any order PoV Potter than MC. Story is not rushed. And CHC dont forgive after just sorry. Im waiting for more
8/14/2019 c22 MumsieDo
By the Force! What an incredible update! I loved it! That heartfelt exchange between A and P was PERFECT! And, the ending was both hopeful and funny! I can totally picture all their faces in that hangar bay confrontation! This was worth the wait! Thank you!
By the Force! What an incredible update! I loved it! That heartfelt exchange between A and P was PERFECT! And, the ending was both hopeful and funny! I can totally picture all their faces in that hangar bay confrontation! This was worth the wait! Thank you!
8/13/2019 c22 Kiwi
Thank you so much for updating! I was so excited to read this chapter and it didn't disappoint at all! This is one of my favourite Star Wars fanfics so I'm glad you decided to continue it!
Thank you so much for updating! I was so excited to read this chapter and it didn't disappoint at all! This is one of my favourite Star Wars fanfics so I'm glad you decided to continue it!
8/13/2019 c22 Guest
This is the chapter I have been waiting for and it was even better that I hoped! Thank you so much for this story and I hope all the best for you
This is the chapter I have been waiting for and it was even better that I hoped! Thank you so much for this story and I hope all the best for you
8/13/2019 c22 HL starwars
YASSSSSS I’M SCREAMING I LOVE THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY AND I WAS SO WORRIED THAT IT WAS GOING TO BE ABANDONED BUT WHEN I SAW THE NEW CHAPTER UP I IMMEDIATELY HAD TO READ IT AND NOW I’M GOING TO READ THE WHOLE STORY AGAIN BECAUSE I AM SO OBSESSED! Please continue this beautiful fanfic as soon as you can!
YASSSSSS I’M SCREAMING I LOVE THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY AND I WAS SO WORRIED THAT IT WAS GOING TO BE ABANDONED BUT WHEN I SAW THE NEW CHAPTER UP I IMMEDIATELY HAD TO READ IT AND NOW I’M GOING TO READ THE WHOLE STORY AGAIN BECAUSE I AM SO OBSESSED! Please continue this beautiful fanfic as soon as you can!
8/12/2019 c22
14Power of Magic
Don't worry, I'm still a reader for this fanfic. Glad that you updated this story though, and sorry that you had to go through all of what happened to you. Hope that you don't take as long to update the next chapter

Don't worry, I'm still a reader for this fanfic. Glad that you updated this story though, and sorry that you had to go through all of what happened to you. Hope that you don't take as long to update the next chapter
8/12/2019 c22 cachulfaian
Please continue this! It's getting to a beautiful point. Can't wait to see how do Obi-Wan and Anakin/Vader? make up
Please continue this! It's getting to a beautiful point. Can't wait to see how do Obi-Wan and Anakin/Vader? make up
8/12/2019 c22 Paul Lenzen
Well I'm still reading... This was damn good.. I can't wait to read the next chapter... Good job
Well I'm still reading... This was damn good.. I can't wait to read the next chapter... Good job